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The Sickness (DT)



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Mon May 10, 2010 11:58 pm
Jas says...



Yeah...this sort of died out. Anyone wanna try to bring it back up?
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Mon May 10, 2010 11:59 pm
Sins says...



I hate it when Storybooks die... they always do. Smelly. :|

I'm willing to try Jas...
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Tue May 11, 2010 12:04 am
Jas says...



I thought this had loads of potential too. :(
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~
  





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Tue May 11, 2010 12:05 am
Sins says...



I know like!
I had a good feeling about it...
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Tue May 11, 2010 9:41 am
IndisBubbles says...



I'm bringing it back! :D
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Tue May 11, 2010 9:54 am
ScarlettFire says...



It's not dead. Well, not for me anyhow. I've been trying to figure out what my character will do now... :?
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Wed May 12, 2010 9:58 pm
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Kamas says...



This storybook needs a good kick in the rear, it's just hitting a slow spot. :)
"Nothing is permanent in this wicked world - not even our troubles." ~ Charles Chaplin

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Thu May 13, 2010 2:45 pm
Sins says...



I say we blow something up... explosions kick everything off... :lol:

haha not really... that would just fail. We need to think of something exciting that we can carry on throughout the entire SB... Like try and find something that causes loads of danger and loads of problems. That way, we might be able to keep it up.

Do what exactly, I don't know... :roll:
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Thu May 13, 2010 9:03 pm
IndisBubbles says...



I have an idea; we should meet the mutant children. Like a couple of us gets stolen within
in the night and taken hostage from Aerrow's sister Annabelle, who is
like really strong and their is an army of other little mutants around her.

So it'll be like the rest trying to find them and the streets are beginning to flock
with these little menaces and the teenagers are beginning to somehow take affect, though they are becoming brainless and flesh hungry...

Just a suggestion.
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Sat May 15, 2010 3:04 am
Kamas says...



Who would get kidnapped?
"Nothing is permanent in this wicked world - not even our troubles." ~ Charles Chaplin

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