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Gender: Female
Points: 990
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Sat Apr 24, 2010 10:58 pm
Brea says...

** Post any ideas, and profiles here. If you have any questions just ask, and i'll be happy to answer.

o No Cursing, or vulgar language.(On exception of; shit, ass, and crap)
o Romance is allowed, just not vivid scenes and not stretching post. And exception for fighting though. That can be very very long posts.
o Only two characters to on person.
o Posts should be frequent and 150 words length.
o Very detailed characters and profiles should be added into DT.


Humans are so reliant on robots that when something is amiss in the data field and corrupts the system they do not know what to do. Deaths are occurring all over Forsberg, and agents are blaming a serial killer. Though, the people of Forsberg find out later on who the real killer is.

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Gender: Female
Points: 990
Reviews: 4
Sat Apr 24, 2010 11:07 pm
Brea says...

Name: Avril Larsen



Appearance: Short yellow bobish blonde hair that is usally let down. She has indigo eyes that usually look hazy, and a tan complexion from sports. She stands tall, though not to tall, with a slim figure.

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History: Avril has always lived in Forsberg with her mother and father. Her father, a scientist for Itex, is never home. Always working on experiments, and often sends over gifts. Because of this, Avril spends more time with her hover board then anyone else.

Her mother is a hopeless alcholic who is to busy flirting with "Suitable" replacements to spend anytime with her daughter.

Likes/Dislikes: Avril cannot stand her parents, though she still does love them. She cannot go anywhere without her hoverboard or earphones.

Strengths/Weaknesses:She is fast and agile, with a quick thinking mindset. Though she isn't veyr strong and often comes across as dimwitted with her chirpy, bubbly personality.

Up For love:Yes.

Other: She always wears a locket around her neck, which has a picture of her and her grand mother before she passed away.

If it looks like a duck, and it quacks like a duck…you should not be so quick to jump to conclusions.
— Cecil Gershwin Palmer