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Thu Apr 15, 2010 4:38 pm
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Sins says...



Hm...
Yeah, I think it would be best if we started it so that the characters know each other. We'll start it with them all meeting up in a certain place, at a certain time. Then we could go from there?
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Sat Apr 17, 2010 1:59 am
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Okay, mainly it's about knowing the other people running away. No one is really supposed to know anyone else apart from Mitch.

And I noticed that some characters seem to be ignoring other characters? That's fine if they don't notice them, but it could get confusing as to who's there or not.

That first part is directed at Fictionfinatic, by the way. Unless Fic's character is somehow all-knowing?

And the time stamp is fine, if a little mixed up but it's not the worst thing. If you think you're post is fine, don't change it. And Fic? Could you try to make your posts a bit longer than one paragraph that consists of 5? lines. I'm not trying to be mean, I'm just trying to give the others more to go on.
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Sat Apr 17, 2010 2:01 am
ToritheMonster says...



Oh, I didn't know that... guess I forgot. All in favor of getting gsp to change it so we all did know Mitch and so our posts make sense?
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Sat Apr 17, 2010 2:08 am
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Yes. I think we'll try that. Unless Gsp is like someone I contacted, and won't reply... I doubt she is though. Anyway, yeah.

And jsut another note; please remember to read the posts before yours before posting. It helps to avoid confusion, etc. You get the idea.
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