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Tue Mar 23, 2010 11:03 pm
ScarlettFire says...



Yeah, and you can always PM her to ask her about it.
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Tue Mar 23, 2010 11:31 pm
Threnody says...



Lets assume I said yes :)
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Tue Mar 23, 2010 11:41 pm
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Alright then :lol:
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Tue Mar 23, 2010 11:45 pm
ToritheMonster says...



Wait... Jessi s your character? Why did I think she was Texan's?OKay, then... Let's see.... um.... bide time, people, make posts!
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Tue Mar 23, 2010 11:52 pm
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I've been waiting for Foster or one of the others to come in... Ashley needs to cause a scene soon... >.>
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Wed Mar 24, 2010 12:24 am
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Hero is Forever's character, Jessie is mine.
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Wed Mar 24, 2010 2:07 am
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thats what i thought.
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Thu Mar 25, 2010 7:40 am
Lydia1995 says...



So lets get this straight,

Jess is going to die from a fight with Rory in a burst of evilness. Ashley freaks because she thought that he was her friend but he apologizes. (Can we add in something like because Ashley has been dragged off with Foster to power enhance, Rory could send Carmen his sister in to rescue her from that and so she forgives him?)
Rory, Susan and Ashley are going to escape because Rory will grab some keys while Susan distracts.

Is this right?
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Thu Mar 25, 2010 7:46 am
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Um, first Ashley has the power enhance stuff. She's about to cause a scene in the lunch room/cafeteria.... Then after she gets back the whole thing with Rory and his evilness wwhere Jess dies. Then they escape... After Ashley forgives him, I think...

Actually, I thought Foster was meant to kill Jess?
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Thu Mar 25, 2010 10:22 am
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Either way is fine. Lydia, is Rory your character? And Foster is Texan's. You two, would you please decide that amongst yourselves here? Who wants to be the killer? After you do that, we'll either go with the plot Lydia posted or Scarlett's edit.
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Thu Mar 25, 2010 1:49 pm
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I'm going to be gone over now and the weekend, away from computers. I'll be back on Monday.

Also, if I might speak up, I think it would be more dramatic to have Rory, a patient, kill Jessie than Foster who has already killed quite a few.

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Thu Mar 25, 2010 1:55 pm
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It's okay. I checked and it is Rory who we thought should kill Jess.

Oh, and I posted. Feel free to threaten Ashley or whatever else you plan on doing.
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Sat Mar 27, 2010 5:46 pm
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Ok so Rory is killing Jess in a sudden outburst after Ashley has had her power enhance and scene in the cafeteria yes?
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Sat Mar 27, 2010 6:35 pm
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Yeah. Ash has had her little drama in the cafetria. She's now in Isolation.
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Mon Mar 29, 2010 12:27 am
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And then Foster will come into iso and give/teach Ash the power-enhancing stuff. How about, as Rory is dragged away to a different iso, Susan sees him and, as she is confused, breaks him out. Then, they go back for Ashley after Foster's done w/ her?
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