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Tue Jan 19, 2010 1:13 am
Jas says...



Kay this is the storybook discussion thingy-ma-bobber. Any questions should be asked here. And all irrelevants....


***RIP Mr. Squirrel***
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apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~
  





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Tue Jan 19, 2010 5:37 am
foxfire says...



just curious of the plot...if we were placed in the woods, are we supposed to fin a way out or who is behind this?
John McClane: Drop it. It's the police.
Tony: You won't hurt me.
John McClane: Oh, yeah? Why not?
Tony: Because you're a policeman. There are rules for policemen.
John McClane: Yeah. That's what my captain keeps telling me
  





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Tue Jan 19, 2010 10:39 am
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I dont really think we can find out who is behind it because it wouldnt make sense for him/her to be in the place with us.
"If the king doesn't lead, how can he expect his subordinates to follow?"
  





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Wed Jan 20, 2010 1:28 am
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What happened which is spoiling the whole thing but whatevr is that your all in a giant 100 mile across dome-thing. You have scientists watching you for basic survival as they plan to give all humans that are important enough SASS' if they work. What enventually is going to happen is that we will be forced due to no food to revolt against one another and kill each other. The Scientists want to see which skils were most sucessful.


so yeah ruined the entire thing but..:) smiles
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Wed Jan 20, 2010 9:25 am
foxfire says...



and that is what we are starting to do...

sorry for ruining it...
John McClane: Drop it. It's the police.
Tony: You won't hurt me.
John McClane: Oh, yeah? Why not?
Tony: Because you're a policeman. There are rules for policemen.
John McClane: Yeah. That's what my captain keeps telling me
  





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Wed Jan 20, 2010 7:25 pm
Jas says...



It's ok, I guess you guys are all authors in this story and I shouldn't hold you out from the full plot :)
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~
  





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Thu Jan 21, 2010 12:18 am
foxfire says...



okay...i have been observing recently the plot

1) the meeting-our characters meet
2) the Grey child- your characters against Grey
3) adversaries- the introduction of other characters and the fall of the group's network

from that, we are now one for themselves...what i want to know is what's next? Will the group be divided to those who adapt in the forest and those who seek out or that there will a new creature that will challenges us all??
John McClane: Drop it. It's the police.
Tony: You won't hurt me.
John McClane: Oh, yeah? Why not?
Tony: Because you're a policeman. There are rules for policemen.
John McClane: Yeah. That's what my captain keeps telling me
  





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Thu Jan 21, 2010 12:28 am
Jas says...



Lumans are whats next. Half-lupine Half-human. These are the scary shits. :) Think CCP and Guamindong during WW2. Grey is CCP, Annabelle, Mirus, Logan and Iffy and Venus are Guamindong...Lumans are JApan. We team up to attack the Lumans. :) hope this makes sense to you..made sense in my mind


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I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~
  





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Thu Jan 21, 2010 1:01 am
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sure but question what is CCp and guamindong?
John McClane: Drop it. It's the police.
Tony: You won't hurt me.
John McClane: Oh, yeah? Why not?
Tony: Because you're a policeman. There are rules for policemen.
John McClane: Yeah. That's what my captain keeps telling me
  





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Thu Jan 21, 2010 2:28 am
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CCP is the Communist regime now in power in China, the China Communist Party. Gumanidong was the opposing party who were the "good guys". They were led by Chang Kai Shek I think before he fled to Taiwan because CCP gained power. Sorry we just finished Asia in school so Im having mass overload with Chinese Politics
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~
  





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Thu Jan 21, 2010 3:25 am
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that's fine...
John McClane: Drop it. It's the police.
Tony: You won't hurt me.
John McClane: Oh, yeah? Why not?
Tony: Because you're a policeman. There are rules for policemen.
John McClane: Yeah. That's what my captain keeps telling me
  





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Thu Jan 21, 2010 3:41 am
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oh god i must have freaked you out o.0 *_*
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Thu Jan 21, 2010 3:43 am
Light_Devil! says...



In the grand scheme of things I was thinking Mirus would more or less play it like Switzerland. Neutral, but carefully helping on the sides. :D (If this helps by referencing to things we've all learnt about.)

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Thu Jan 21, 2010 11:05 am
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that sounds good Light. BTW: fox your last post didnt make sense since we are tied to trees.
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Fri Jan 22, 2010 12:22 am
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don't worry, i fixed it in some way...
John McClane: Drop it. It's the police.
Tony: You won't hurt me.
John McClane: Oh, yeah? Why not?
Tony: Because you're a policeman. There are rules for policemen.
John McClane: Yeah. That's what my captain keeps telling me
  








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