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Shadow Valentine



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Wed Dec 02, 2009 2:14 am
pudin.junidf says...



Ok
so I'm oficially lost. Can someone tell me what's happened?
Les sanglots longs
Des violons
De l'autonne
Blessent mon coeur
D'une langueur
Monotone.

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Wed Dec 02, 2009 2:24 am
LovelessSummer says...



Were in class and it's Valentines day, and, yeah, we're working on pacing this whole thing, not moving on until everyone has had their post.
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Wed Dec 02, 2009 7:16 pm
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I got a good idea today at school. I was thinking that aside from the normal school life, there are going to have to be events that can cause excitement and are fun to do. (like the valentines day dance) So, I was thinking that there should be a school shooting. If the shooter has powers or not, I don't care or know, but it would be fun to do, our characters being held hostage by a guy with a gun, but not being able to use their powers because they'll be taken. It would be great if great if you guys could come up with some events too. But now, we should focus on the dance. I'm going to post next, maybe not, I think I'm waiting for somebody.
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Thu Dec 03, 2009 11:54 pm
Nick101 says...



My character is (was, still is a killer (not killer killer but you know what I mean, she knows what it feels like to be a criminal)so she knows how to intimidate people or manipulate. It's awesome to have a fellow criminal talking to her again. But yes dance first.
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Sat Dec 05, 2009 8:38 pm
Nick101 says...



Can I drag Arie and Calvin in?
I don't want to lose you guys.
I follow four rules when writing
1. Don't think. Just write.
2.Never take the pencil from the page when writing
3.Don't erase. Even if what you wrote didn't make sense
4.No need for grammar,punctuation, or spelling when writing

And when your done writing you stop and break all the rules
  





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Sat Dec 05, 2009 8:39 pm
infinite reality says...



sure
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