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Tue May 19, 2009 2:17 pm
bonnie babe says...



*glares at Damar for abandoning Hinata*
I think that there should be some character development for Hinata and Theo since their pasts are quite simalar and I can only think of three things for Hinata to do right now...
1. I could wait for some one to come and rescue her... but that might take a while and
I love posting too much.
2. I could get her to try to escape but I don't know how she could ever succeed or how
hunter would ever let her be able to get free.
3. I could make her join the hunter and then get her to infiltrate the main group.
I really don't know what to do, if anyone has any ideas please let me know!!!!!
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Tue May 19, 2009 5:59 pm
Moo says...



Number three! The drama would be unreal! :shock:
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Wed May 20, 2009 4:29 pm
bonnie babe says...



Its going to be hard to come up with a way to do that.....
OK I shall use option number three!!!!!!
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Mon May 25, 2009 3:52 am
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ridersofdamar says...



I wanna bring Gale back to life!! but I dunno how...
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Wed May 27, 2009 11:32 am
Jaden G. says...



Okay, so Prospekt wants Violet to die. That would put an even more traumatizing affect on Peyton who is already breaking down.

If Peyton leads the others to where the hunter met her, then somehow we could track him to where the hunters were meeting, have a fight and Violet could be killed. I'm sorry if I feel heartless in this, I don't mean to be.

Where did Triston and Alucard go anyway?
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"I'm a time traveler. I laugh at archaeologists."

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Wed May 27, 2009 4:57 pm
ridersofdamar says...



not sure right now. Alucard is a mean vampire state where he would likely kill you if he saw you. They are roaming, looking for answers
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Wed May 27, 2009 6:23 pm
Moo says...



*cries* VIOLET CAN'T DIE
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Wed May 27, 2009 6:34 pm
bonnie babe says...



They could arrive when Hunter is having the meeting then Theo, Asuka or Hinata could kill her...
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Fri May 29, 2009 11:56 am
Jaden G. says...



Is there any place they can stay for the night? If they want they can stay at Naomi's apartment, though it would be very awkward for her.

Naomi: I hate you

Me: :P

And since Asuka is after Jack and Theo and Hinata are after who knows then it could bring the hunters close to her house and start up another fight where Violet dies. **shrugs**
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Wed Jun 03, 2009 8:19 pm
Moo says...



After all the stuff we put these characters through they're gunna need some serious therepy :shock: But the above sounds like a good idea Jaden. Shall we go with that?
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Wed Jun 10, 2009 10:39 am
Jaden G. says...



**So... I take it this storybook is dead?**
"Oh please don't tell me you're archaeologists."

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"I'm a time traveler. I laugh at archaeologists."

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