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Wed May 20, 2009 11:43 am
phantom_blackfire_wings says...



What if Tabin was one of the Stranger's brother or something so that's why it hit them so hard? Just a suggestion.
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Wed May 20, 2009 7:22 pm
Lauren2010 says...



I like the idea about the queen and jae being taken to the light castle (i think that was the idea of someone..). Jae is currently very unhappy and extremely worried about being with the queen. She is terrified of her mother without the buffer of her father being around. I have a feeling the queen isn't crazy about her daughter either. So Jae will be trying to escape, or needing rescuing at some point. So keeping her under watch would be a good idea.
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Wed May 20, 2009 7:45 pm
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I'll post in an hour or two...sorry, exams.

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Thu May 21, 2009 5:00 pm
Jaden G. says...



If Shasti was so close to the queen... why didn't she take him?
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Thu May 21, 2009 5:12 pm
phantom of the potter says...



Im confused about that too - I thought all of the princes were going? :?
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Thu May 21, 2009 7:38 pm
Bloo says...



Well Zarin is injured, so he will have to stay.

I think Jae and another prince should go. Like Shasti runs away to join them and then Zarin and (sorry forgot name) stay. For now. And when they need to leave, maybe, it is because Siry stole something from the castle, that is very important, and they must retrieve it.
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Fri May 22, 2009 12:12 pm
Incognito says...



I think the reason why she took Jae was because Jae was the King's favourite, and she isn't able to take one of the heir's to the throne. I think Shasti should stay because that means that there would be avid drama and the search for the Queen could possibly be powered by Shasti's motives.

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Sat May 23, 2009 12:47 am
Jaden G. says...



That is true. If Shasti does stay and word of the queen's capture does arrive, he would have more drive to find his mother than any of the other princes.

So now that Berend and Michiko are teaching the princes, I think Berend should train Raleigh and Zarin because they have physical elements and Michiko can train mostly Shasti because Spirit and Beast are so much different than the core elements.
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Sat May 23, 2009 2:00 am
moon jumper says...



Great ideas everyone. Just wondering, what should Jae, the queen, and Eosa post? Or should they just wait for a little while?

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Sat May 23, 2009 2:06 pm
Bloo says...



Well post them with out there items. Siry took them. Try and escape. I thought that Shasti would go and follow, and rescue them from Siry.
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Sat May 23, 2009 2:18 pm
Jaden G. says...



That comes later. King Paian and the others haven't learned of their capture yet. Maybe Siry will ask for a ransom or a witness from a local village saw it all happen.
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Sat May 23, 2009 2:31 pm
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Okay. I guess that would work.
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Sun May 24, 2009 3:24 am
phantom of the potter says...



Okay - this sounds great to me, but let me make sure I have it right -

So Shasti unwillingly stays at the castle. When the Queen's capture comes to Shasti's attention he head the search for her.

That is where it gets a little muddy for me - In you guys' opinion, should Shasti, say, head a group of people out to help the Queen, or stay at the castle and organize the efforts?

And I second that thought that Michiko should mostly take over Shasti's training.
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Sun May 24, 2009 12:23 pm
Lauren2010 says...



this all sounds good to me.

And yeah, I think the queen took Jae because she wanted to deprive the king of his only daughter, and she hoped that maybe she could 'fix' Jae and make her more like the queen herself.
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Sun May 24, 2009 3:50 pm
Bloo says...



I think go alone. But either way, I want one person to stay captive there. So they have something, or they keep all the items for the elements.

Both of these are temporary.
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