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Mon Mar 09, 2009 12:47 am
Bloo says...



If anyone wants my guy you can have him.
That User Who Changed Their Name A Dozen Times And So No One Ever Knew Who They Were Half the Time and When They Did Only Used Bolt.

The tragic tale of losing all #Brand for nothing in return.

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Mon Mar 09, 2009 8:13 am
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No Joe didn't kill the seer the seer died when the ship wrecked
  





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Mon Mar 09, 2009 1:24 pm
thefireinmeisJC says...



Oh, ok. Ship wrecked....we're all in the water...swimming to shore...our guide is dead...we are lost.

Cool. Fine with me. : - )

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Mon Mar 09, 2009 9:05 pm
Rosendorn says...



Jok101- Why do you know so much about the Water clan if you're Fire clan? Jess is the Water Clan girl.

And, how in the world are we going to find the glass now?!
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Mon Mar 09, 2009 11:57 pm
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Hahaha thats why this is call an adventure! Who knows how we'll find the glass, but I am interested to see how it all turns out...
  





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Tue Mar 10, 2009 4:34 pm
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Rosey unicorn- because he's lived their a while and he likes the history and the teachings of the place so he's learnt them I don't mean he can water bend or whatever I just mean he knows stuff is all
  





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Wed Mar 11, 2009 12:39 am
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Wow...I'm soo lost. I forgot to check it for 1, maybe two nights and man...I'll have to look at everything over again, but if and idea I have works, then I'll put it here...
I realized that I said I'd be gone for only two weeks...but I was gone for much longer.I hope to stay on this time. :)
  





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Wed Mar 11, 2009 7:59 pm
thefireinmeisJC says...



Ok guys, (Rosey specifically) I kinda meant for the "monster" to actually be a monster...not a spirit. Besides, if it was a spirit of the forest...Aldiae would know about it.

Ok, I'm not a harry potter fan (kill me later) but I was watching the first movie a few nights ago...

I got an idea. What about the monster being a guardian of a map to where the glass is? So we have to somehow kill the monster...

The reason Zan didn't hear is because thats how the monster kills stuff...it controls its target into thinking nothing is coming.

sound interesting? a little?

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Wed Mar 11, 2009 8:55 pm
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Hrm, kay. I'll remove that post. (Full out deleted) I was trying to come up with a new guide.

As for the idea, I like it JC!

Shall we use it?
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Thu Mar 12, 2009 7:32 pm
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I'll post asking everyone to come to the DT so we can see that plot idea is ok.

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Fri Mar 13, 2009 1:14 am
MidnightVampire says...



Works for me. If you haven't noticed, August is on his way back home. I promise, he'll be back soon-ish.
I like the idea.
I realized that I said I'd be gone for only two weeks...but I was gone for much longer.I hope to stay on this time. :)
  





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Fri Mar 13, 2009 5:37 am
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Sounds good to me. And just tolet you all know tomorrow is the day I leave. I am gone from 3/13-3/24. Now I am not sure if I will be able to get on a computer but trust me when I say I will try. Keeo Korah in this though because I will be back!

Oh and I love the monster idea. Plus a map could be really fun, what if it got torn in two... or someone stole it... not that we need anymore problems then we already have :P
  





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Sat Mar 14, 2009 5:13 am
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Yeah, sounds like fun. I'm getting pictures of an ever-changing map. As soon as you try to focus on a particular spot, a map of a completely different place pops up, but all of them are related to the Glass. Once we visit a place, it disappears from the map until we reach the final hiding place of the Glass. What do you think?
There once was a cat.
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Sat Mar 14, 2009 11:35 pm
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I like that idea
  





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Sun Mar 15, 2009 8:16 pm
MidnightVampire says...



Alright,so I can't really post until you guys are done fighting because of the whole time thing..so...does anyone have any idea what they want to happen..I figured we should talk this through so that we can get un-stuck.
I realized that I said I'd be gone for only two weeks...but I was gone for much longer.I hope to stay on this time. :)
  








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