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Thu Feb 12, 2009 10:57 pm
PhoenixBishop says...



Yes I pm'd her about her absence. I will give it a few more days before I act. For now just make sure she's mentioned from time to time.
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Thu Feb 12, 2009 11:37 pm
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Ok I relized after are run in with Drake, that he wasn't strong enough to take on all of us. So I came up ewith the idea of a partner. Problem is I don't know who or what she will be. I'm thinking that to stay with the star theme her powers should e based of a non Zodiac constellation.

What do you think?
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Thu Feb 12, 2009 11:41 pm
Bloo says...



that sounds good maybe she could be Dorado, the dragon, she could have hard skin, fire breath and wings. along with other enhanced body functions
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Thu Feb 12, 2009 11:44 pm
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She could be Melpomene! The muse of tragedy. :cry:

You could really play with her skills and stuff.

And I love it how you consult us about these things.

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Thu Feb 12, 2009 11:55 pm
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I like Forever's idea - she could cause misery or... something along those lines... She'd be a powerful enemy to have...
  





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Fri Feb 13, 2009 2:24 am
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I think I will use both. Correction the dragon is Draco what you offered is the swordfish which we have plenty of. I will use draco the dragon. She will have super strength and pryokenisis(the ability to create fire with mind, thick skin, and flight. The one you offered will be a young boy with the ability to manipulate emotions.
This is one little planet in one tiny solar system in a galaxy that’s barely out of its diapers. I’m old, Dean. Very old. So I invite you to contemplate how insignificant I find you.

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Sat Feb 14, 2009 3:29 am
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Soon I'm going to have to kill off some charters. I believe it will be Cancer and if Kitty15 doesn't get on soon Lybra will have to die in the upcoming battle.
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Sat Feb 14, 2009 8:00 pm
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Sorry about my absence everyone. I've been moving towns a lot recently so my internet set-up is rather unstable but I'll catch myself up and write a post out within the next few hours x
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Sun Feb 15, 2009 12:03 am
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Ok, you won't be the casuality. I have decided that besides cancer their must be anther death. I have picked already although I'm waitng for some advice. Two people will die. Cancer is the obvious, and the other will be a surprise.

Ok I've been given some advice, and I'm now confused what to do. What do you think about killing of of a Zodiac. Note if your charter is the one to die, you can take over an existing non used charter, or make up a new one that is constellation related.

Never mind I got a plan.
This is one little planet in one tiny solar system in a galaxy that’s barely out of its diapers. I’m old, Dean. Very old. So I invite you to contemplate how insignificant I find you.

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Fri Feb 20, 2009 1:33 pm
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Ok lets bring this storybook to an end. So get back to posting it's alomost over. We just have to take down Mr. Teax.
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Fri Feb 20, 2009 9:54 pm
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We're ending it already?! We've only got about a few hundred posts! Hmmmm
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Sat Feb 21, 2009 1:23 am
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yeah, you can't just end it at 12 pages, we have to try to get it to 50 or higher
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Sat Feb 21, 2009 1:52 am
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Fine I will not end it, but Emily, Will, and Tony haven't posted in awile. I'll see if I can get them back, but if I can't they will have to die. Mainly wil, because he's definetly broken the rule of two a week.
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Sun Feb 22, 2009 4:52 pm
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I'm back, and have read the thoughts on continuing after Mr. Teax is dead. I've decided to have my character go out on his own to 'dig' up information and find a way to return to a normal life. I'll continue to post, but my posts will reflect what you guys post. Then when Teax is dead my character will create a situation to continue on. Sound about right?
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Sun Mar 01, 2009 8:32 pm
Bloo says...



Are any of the bad power people coming on the mission with us. Or is it just the good guys. Cause i want to post but i did not want ti mess it up.
  








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