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Fri Feb 06, 2009 11:06 pm
Rosendorn says...



I like that idea. It smooths things out And gives us a nice direction.
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Sat Feb 07, 2009 12:04 am
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Yes, that does sound nice. So, if we're going to Rasdont, we're very, very likely to find some trouble on the way. Maybe we get in a situation where we have to use our powers to escape, and when we try to rest in a small village, they see the powers as supernatural. It'd be interesting.
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Sat Feb 07, 2009 10:37 am
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I'm not in this one, but who was shadow, I was glancing over it and it didn't appear to have been chosen despite the facts that it's been crossed off.
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Sat Feb 07, 2009 12:00 pm
WaterVyper says...



Uh Billy? Robin is male...
There once was a cat.
He wasn’t particularly fat.
Fuzzy was his favorite mat.
And really, that was that.

Oh, but did you really think so?
Keep reading, it’s just the start of the show!
And as for how far this tale will go…
Well, even the cat doesn’t know.
  





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Sat Feb 07, 2009 3:59 pm
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Light_Devil- Darkness has been claimed by TN. Her profile is on page 2, since she was one of the added characters.
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Wed Feb 11, 2009 12:42 am
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WaterVyper wrote:So, if we're going to Rasdont, we're very, very likely to find some trouble on the way. Maybe we get in a situation where we have to use our powers to escape, and when we try to rest in a small village, they see the powers as supernatural. It'd be interesting.


Sorry I didn't get back to you earlier.

As for the idea, I wouldn't mind that. It might also lead up to a clue as to where the Elite are, or provide a place for a person to get captured.
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Fri Feb 13, 2009 11:30 pm
abstractpoet says...



Okay, so either my eyes aren't working or the storybook is gone, because I can't find it.
So what happened, or could someone give me a link?
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Sat Feb 14, 2009 12:47 am
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There you go. ^_^
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Sat Feb 14, 2009 5:37 pm
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How many Elites/people are attacking us? And what is their point of attacking us at this time? After all they couldn't have bent the Elites wills more than a small amount since they've been kidnapped.
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Sat Feb 14, 2009 5:54 pm
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Between Viper's post and mine, there are two Elite, one of which has been lured away.

As for purpose, they haven't managed to transport the Elite much farther then the Firewing academy. In other words, the group is Much closer then they think to finding some of the Elite, so the kidnappers from Rasdont need to buy some time.

As for wills being bent, the kidnappers (from all the surrounding kingdoms) have been planing this for months. The Elite were just about half-controlled by the time they were captured, which is how they got captured so easily. That was achieved through some cutting edge potions and dark magic that slowly wore the Elite down. That's not enough to have the Elite attacking the trainees full-power, but too much for them to disobey.
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Sat Feb 14, 2009 7:17 pm
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Okay, thanks!
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Sun Feb 15, 2009 12:30 am
WaterVyper says...



Oh boy. This is going to make things a bit difficult. Well, it is quite fun.
There once was a cat.
He wasn’t particularly fat.
Fuzzy was his favorite mat.
And really, that was that.

Oh, but did you really think so?
Keep reading, it’s just the start of the show!
And as for how far this tale will go…
Well, even the cat doesn’t know.
  





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Tue Feb 17, 2009 1:20 am
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The order of Elites:

Animal first

The rest are blank. And until they get out of the forest, it's suicide to bring the Nature Elite until the group is out of the forest.
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Tue Feb 17, 2009 1:29 am
TNCowgirl says...



That was might thought. Don't bring the Nature until they have some help from more Elites.

I'm up for getting Keren soon. Course that could be a little lopsided and all. But I'm all for it. I'm not sure how that will go down though. I know he can use Shadow masses. He can make them bascially human. But oh well.

Ya, we need to figure out an order :D
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Tue Feb 17, 2009 4:02 am
FinalFreedom says...



TN- just to let you know, I read the posts, and I know that the bear was gone, etc. I only posed my own version of it form where Vincent would have come in, it isn't that I didn't read it or anything. You'll find that I will often do that just to get myself there in situations.

I also agree we should make an order. Maybe Water next?
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