So, where will we all be starting? In my opinion, we should start off with a conference where the students are told about the kidnapping of the Elite's.
Being the spy, I would probably already be there, already informed, right? Is it safe to assume that, since I probably hold a large importance to the Firewing's, as much as everyone else, that while we're on our mission I might have small little ventures of which I do alone?
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Hm, I have this little idea of everyone getting captured and pitted against each other, like in a gladiator arena. They're told that they have to fight to survive, and once they've entertained enough, they can go free. An optional part is somebody (somebodies) getting brainwashed. Of course, this is just my random babbling.
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I don't know if that would work Viper. The whole plot is trying to find the Elite. What might work (based off your idea) is one or two get captured and have to fight the Elite in the way you were describing. Then, the rest of the group would have to go find them. Another twist could be that one member allowed the other to get captured.
And one character has already gotten brainwashed before the storybook started.
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Well, I had the idea of my character (Meela, air) being show something on the wind that could help direct us. Maybe she could see one of the Elite being kidnapped and recognizes the kidnapper as she same race as she is? (as my character is a foreigner)
Then we could continue to whatever kingdom Meela is from.
What do you think?
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Rosey- for your idea, I would gladly throw Vincent into the ring against the Elite's. He shows vast loyalty for them, and to have to face them would be a great judge for his character. Would be cool
Also, if you are all wanting to suspect someone for being a spy and working for the kidnappers, you can always blame Vincent. He won't be working for them, but he IS a spy, so he DOES seem like an obvious target xD
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Final- Maybe. Thing is, All the characters are pretty loyal to the Elite, so it would boil down to character. That, and who'd be the most likely to get a little messed up after facing them. xD
Character torture is a hobby of mine.....
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Rosey, I believe Kartaroff was the person she sensed on the wind, that took her mentor o.o We don't know WHERE he is, only WHO he is I guess that just leaves us with the R place?
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Whoops.
I meant Kartaroff to be a place. I guess I didn't make that clear. Sorry!
But maybe it would be better for Kartaroff to be a person from Rasdont. At least, it would all fit together nicely. And then we wouldn't have to worry about two different places.
What do you guys think?
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