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Tue Dec 23, 2008 12:43 am
OverEasy says...



Lol other, Lissa is a lesbian.
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Tue Dec 23, 2008 8:02 am
Jiggity says...



XD.

Where's Charlie?

Does anyone know?
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Sun Jan 04, 2009 9:15 am
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Not sure. Sorry I've been gone for so long. We were busy over Christmas and then my internet's connection cut out. I'm on my parents' computer right now, but I probably can't stay on it too long. Everyone seems to have vanished anyway. Hopefully we'll all be back soon.
  





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Sun Jan 04, 2009 9:21 pm
Rydia says...



Alright ye slackers, back to work. Now where's those character bios [s]master[/s] mister Dono asked for, huh? If you've not made at least one yet, grab a partner and get going and if you're shy on the grabbing side then post here and be grabbed or Jigs and I will pair you up.

We need every extra character accounted for so we know how many spare bodies we have to be killing off/ torturing.

And we also need to know who's still around so pipe up!

Right, we have orders and we have plot. There is to be no land sighted for two whole days and people are to start and get very thirsty pretty soon. Of course, there's the wine and beer and a little water so not too soon ^^

I will be posting in a day or two. I expect there to be at least one new post before I get there.
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Mon Jan 05, 2009 7:51 am
Lord Anzius says...



I would want to create a bio for the sailor that Deaven imprisoned into one of the cabins.
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Wed Jan 07, 2009 2:21 am
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Then do it. And if you want to keep the girl and mother I kindly suggest you write out their bios too or at least one will be meeting with a timely accident ^^ (I'm a fair person so I can give you four or five days.)
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Thu Jan 08, 2009 12:13 am
Reakeda says...



I'm here, I'm here... er.. well sort of. I just got a new job and I'm trying to figure out a bit of a routine. I've also been sick lately.. and prior to that holidays. Anyway.. I intend on continuing with the Story Book but, it may take me a bit longer yet to get a post out.
  





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Thu Jan 08, 2009 10:16 am
LowKey says...



Still here. ^_^
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Thu Jan 08, 2009 12:22 pm
Lord Anzius says...



Yallow
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Thu Jan 08, 2009 8:05 pm
OverEasy says...



Still here, with the boss man now, I'll get working once he goes away <3


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Fri Jan 09, 2009 7:06 am
Insomnia says...



*is still here* I'll get onto a post soon. Tomorrow, if not tonight.
  





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Sun Jan 11, 2009 9:34 am
Lord Anzius says...



Look out the charrachter bio is here... This is the slaver that Deaven threw into one of the cabins.

Gary Davison

Race: Human
Class: Crew man
Alignment: None after he was abandoned by the captain
[b]Age: 21
Height: 189 cm
Weight: 75kg
Eyes: brown
Hair: light brown
Hits: Beer, rum, vine, women, money, jewels, food, swords.
Misses: Ugly women, empty rum bottles, being smacked on the head,
Strengths: Strength, Cold heartens, navigation
weaknesses: Long range combat, charm, stingy breath,
Clothing: Batched sailors coat and trousers,
Weapons: two handed long sword that was stolen by Deaven
Personality: Outgoing, a bit obnoxious.
Background: Became a sailor at the age of 17, then became a pirate at the age of 19 and finally a slaver at the age of 20

And here are the small girl and her mum:


Laila Upsalla

Race: Human
Class: love slave
Alignment: Her mom
[b]Age: 10
Height: 143 cm
Weight: 30kg
Eyes: blue
Hair: blond
Hits: Dad, mom, heroes, freedom, friends
Misses: slavers, ugly men, scary men, dead people,
Strengths: Stealth, speed, biting
weaknesses: fighting
Clothing: small dress
Weapons: her teeth
Personality: shy,
Background: Her father was sold in another town and now she is traveling with her mother


Maria Upsalla

Race: Human
Class: love slave
Alignment: Her daughter
[b]Age: 30
Height: 169 cm
Weight: 46kg
Eyes: olive green
Hair: blond

Hits: her husband and daughter and people who help them
Misses: Mean people
Strengths: knows how to run away
weaknesses: fighting
Clothing: a bit bigger dress
Weapons: none
Personality: protective
Background: nothing big
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Sun Jan 11, 2009 1:29 pm
Rydia says...



Thank you =)
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Sun Jan 11, 2009 3:35 pm
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just doing my civil duty
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Tue Jan 13, 2009 1:12 am
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Name: Dareth
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Age: 26
Appearance: Average height and quite thin. He has blonde hair and eyes that appear to be black. He is prone to getting very close to people, which can be irritating. Also, his upper body (back, chest) is covered in scars.
Position: Labour worker, has some strength but annoys others.
Personality: Loud and abrasive personality. He tends to come across as very arrogant and aggressive, so he struggles to make lasting relationships in any situation. He is illiterate.
History: Dareth was framed for a murder he did not commit when he was still young, and sent to prison. This is where he received the scars that cover his body. The time in prison made him resentful and withdrawn. However, he refuses to confide in others because he is ashamed of how easily he was framed.
When he was finally released from prison, his parents no longer wanted him in the house, believing him to be responsible for the murders. He was forced to live in the streets, where he was found and taken by slavers.

Hopefully that's sufficient, boss. xD
  








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