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Fri Oct 17, 2008 10:08 pm
TNCowgirl says...



I'm gonna probably be gone for two weeks depending on if the campsite we stop had has internet or not. So keep my people alive please.

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Sun Oct 19, 2008 6:46 pm
Lord Anzius says...



please give me an update on what's going on.. I'm gonna post now.
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Mon Oct 20, 2008 12:32 pm
Jaden G. says...



Has someone told Layleun that ice has already been taken?
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Mon Oct 20, 2008 7:25 pm
Layleun says...



Ummm yeah I'm wind =P Not ice.
  





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Tue Oct 21, 2008 2:24 am
Miss Slade says...



i'm not going to be able to post for a while, so can you guys keep my characters in the story... and alive?
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Wed Oct 22, 2008 11:29 am
Jaden G. says...



Sorry.
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Thu Nov 27, 2008 9:15 pm
phantom_blackfire_wings says...



okay...umm.....are the guardians dead? I'm TOTALLY confused...
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Thu Nov 27, 2008 11:31 pm
Rydia says...



No, they're just minding their own business in Africa or wherever they are... or they would be if people were posting for them.
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Sat Nov 29, 2008 9:06 pm
phantom_blackfire_wings says...



we've all been waiting for May...*sobs*
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Thu Jan 29, 2009 6:05 pm
phantom_blackfire_wings says...



okay, I was wondering how this sounds:

Jessa gets bored (tee hee) and decides that she needs to help figure out the bad guys destructive plan. She goes in undercover and figure out everything because she thinks that she could pass as a bad person because she's newer in the whole thing.
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Wed Feb 18, 2009 2:39 pm
Jaden G. says...



I think its fine.
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Fri Apr 03, 2009 4:41 pm
Jaden G. says...



Wow, everyone is gone... *tear*

if anyone reads this, I was thinking that the kid we were looking for (Raye) could be the element Space. It would give Nathaniel good reason to try and get the kid if he can control the worlds outside of Earth. I don't know, please think about it.
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Fri Apr 03, 2009 6:04 pm
Rydia says...



Sounds like a cool idea.
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