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Sun May 11, 2008 3:11 pm
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Aedomir says...



Here is the DT, it will be updated as reguarly as possible.

Characters
MI6 - Micheal Dunn - Me
MI6 - Carlos Clooney - Vernon
Unit - Dusty Ryder - TNCowgirl
Rus. Weap. Dealer - Ten - Ghostrider
SAS - Chloe Jones - chocoholic
Exremist - Jude - RoryLegend
ASIS - Jack - Billy
CIA - Satika Ferguson - *singerofthenight*

"Bots" - Globally controlled
As of yet, we need far more extremists. Remember, you are allowed two characters so you can create them and just let them be used by other people if you don't want control. If so, say so and I will put them here. As of yet we have:

Alex Valdermore
Gender: F
Embassy: Russian extremist
Rank: Weapons expert
Apperance: Muscular, short black hair and green eyes.
Personality: Likes to joke around, but can be very serious at times.
Last edited by Aedomir on Tue May 13, 2008 5:12 pm, edited 1 time in total.
We are all Sociopaths: The Prologue

Sociopath: So • ci • o • path noun
1. Someone who believes their behaviour is right.
2. Human.
  





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Mon May 12, 2008 8:04 pm
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TNCowgirl says...



Pm people who are really good at stuff like this. Other then that I really don't have anythign. :'(
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Mon May 12, 2008 8:47 pm
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chocoholic says...



I only want control of one person, but I'll create an extremist for somebody else to pick up.

Name: Alex Valdermore
Gender: F
Embassy: Russian extremist
Rank: Weapons expert
Apperance: Muscular, short black hair and green eyes.
Personality: Likes to joke around, but can be very serious at times.

Hope somebody likes her! And feel free to change things about her, this was just my initial idea.
*Don't expect to see me around much in the next couple of weeks. School has started again, and it'll be a couple of weeks before I've settled in. If you've asked me for a critique, you will get it, but not for a little while. Sorry*
  





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Mon May 12, 2008 10:31 pm
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Firestarter says...



I was about to join but I'd like to point out:

Chocoholic: Females are not allowed to join the SAS. Thus Chloe is not realistic.
Nate wrote:And if YWS ever does become a company, Jack will be the President of European Operations. In fact, I'm just going to call him that anyways.
  





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chocoholic says...



Really?! Ok. That's not good. Let's just change that too... can females join M16? I know nothing about this in real life.

Thanks for telling me.
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Tue May 13, 2008 10:36 am
Firestarter says...



Yeah, females can join MI6 or any intelligence services! They just can't be in the SAS because it's a combat unit.
Nate wrote:And if YWS ever does become a company, Jack will be the President of European Operations. In fact, I'm just going to call him that anyways.
  





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Tue May 13, 2008 5:23 pm
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TNCowgirl says...



Singer, you are the CSI person that my girl is going to sneak in and get on the case. You can be her friend or something. But ya.
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Tue May 13, 2008 5:30 pm
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Aedomir says...



Good idea TN.
We are all Sociopaths: The Prologue

Sociopath: So • ci • o • path noun
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2. Human.
  





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Tue May 13, 2008 8:26 pm
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chocoholic says...



Aedomir, do you think you could change my character to working at M16? Because, like Firestarter pointed out, girls can't work in the SAS.

And also, you should meet me at the London airport because Chole is flying back to England now.

Thanks.
*Don't expect to see me around much in the next couple of weeks. School has started again, and it'll be a couple of weeks before I've settled in. If you've asked me for a critique, you will get it, but not for a little while. Sorry*
  





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Tue May 13, 2008 10:39 pm
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TNCowgirl says...



Thanks,

Now can someone post involving my girl so I can post.
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