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Wed May 07, 2008 8:36 pm
Vampy_Girl15 says...



How are you going to be posting the other plots?
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Wed May 07, 2008 8:44 pm
Rydia says...



Take a look at my latest post in the main thread. It should explain everything.
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Thu May 08, 2008 10:35 pm
Bella says...



Just a few comment-ish things

1) Yoyo, I left an opening for you so you could get your character into it
2) Heather, are you going to play the role of the queen, or her messenger in ours, so we're clear on our plot, or can any of us take control of that?
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Fri May 09, 2008 10:26 am
Rydia says...



Anyone can play the queen indirectly but if the storybook hasn't progressed past that point by this afternoon, I'll make an NPC post.
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Sat May 10, 2008 12:59 am
SuicideKing says...



Seems Plot 1 is off to a rocky start. We need more than just myself and Little Sock posting.
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Sat May 10, 2008 11:34 am
Rydia says...



I'll pm a few of the others and remind them to post.
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Wed May 14, 2008 11:46 pm
SuicideKing says...



A question and a quick note...

Question: Sock, where were you going in your post? I find myself at a loss for a post, because I'm not sure which direction you were heading by making my character ride past yours instead of following through with his mission.

Comment: Mason does not run unless the situation absolutely deems it. He is where he wants to be at all times, and if he is not he acts as though he does. His confidence is often strong to the point of unnerving those around him.

Just trying to keep us on track.
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Thu May 15, 2008 9:57 am
Jasmine Hart says...



Mason arrived soon after, almost running, his eyes wild.


I think the "almost" got me round this, but let me know if you feel it needs to be changed.

Is there anything else about your character which you feel I should know?

Jas
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With the certainty of tides,
Just like hopes springing high,
Still I'll rise."
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Wed May 21, 2008 11:04 pm
Vampy_Girl15 says...



In the third storybook are they going to be leaving soon?
I was just wondering.
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Thu May 22, 2008 4:59 pm
Rydia says...



Whenever the writers desire them to leave, they will. My role in the storybook will remain minor so don't feel the need to ask or wait for me to move the plot on. If you're getting bored of the dinner and conversation, advance the plot.
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