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30 Minutes in Heaven

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Sun Apr 13, 2008 1:00 am
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TNCowgirl says...

Ok, we needed this cause Bella is right. it gets annoying.

Now, DR. I have any idea. Luna will need to agree. But maybe they can do that, and I can make a guy character and then she can fall for him cause CALEB IS MINE!
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Sun Apr 13, 2008 1:02 am
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Dr. Jamie Bondage says...

Lol. It's up to Luna. XD Lol. But that's fine with me. XD

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Sun Apr 13, 2008 1:26 am
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Bella says...

Thanks Mabel!!! *huggles*

My other comment was for Dr. Jamie. I was wondering how you thought our characters would be relatioship wise. Should they be dating at the beginning, or hook up at/after/during one of the parties?
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Sun Apr 13, 2008 3:59 pm
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LunaBuna43 says...

eep! I haven't been able to get on till now and i only have ten min. HELP!! oh and I don't care about it much you guys :P
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