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Mon Mar 17, 2008 8:44 pm
Teh Wozzinator says...



XD

I already have enough romance... XD XD XD XD

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Mon Mar 17, 2008 8:48 pm
cat4prowl says...



:roll: yes i think you're good there. What about the other stuff? Anyone?
  





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Mon Mar 17, 2008 10:30 pm
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phantom_blackfire_wings says...



I agree about the fight run pause stuff. Its getting kinda old. La-wink.

I'm going to do some serious thinking...ow...my brain hurts.
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Tue Mar 18, 2008 11:54 pm
Blue Fairy says...



hehe didnt know this exsisted

I'll go wherever you lot go, not bothered what happens (Not that i dont care about the storybook)

I love the drama! :D
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Wed Mar 19, 2008 8:01 pm
cat4prowl says...



okay people, i just read Maximum Ride: The Final Warning and am now in total Max mood. i notice that James Patterson usually balances run fight pause with annoying people who try to 'help' the flock, and the flock trying to find somewhere to kick back and relax.

That might be good.

Also, I find myself able to relate to Max really well. As in, I think a lot like her and I'm pretty sure I could almost sorta kinda write her. This is a problem. Blade=not Max!! I'm extremely tempted to have someone kill Blade off so I can bring in a new character that would be a lot like Max. But not a Max clone, because that would be annoying.

While I like Blade, especially her name, this could really help move the storybook along. Killing off Blade would bring a new kind of drama: sorrow. Then I could bring in a new character that has big ideas and sort of starts to lead the flock.

I like this idea, but I may not be in an exactly sane mood. I'm a Max freak right now.

Another thing that could help is bringing in a human that wants to help or a group of curious (annoying) humans. Or a new breed of Erasers/Flybots.

Just my brain leaking onto the page, let me know what you think!
  





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Wed Mar 19, 2008 8:10 pm
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I was thinking along the same lines. Let's take the Erasers to the future!! Mwa hahahahaaa. (sorry I had to get that out of my system) There are a group of test Erasers out with the newest gadgets. Such as night vision contacts and lightning guns.
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Wed Mar 19, 2008 9:13 pm
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night vision contacts and lightning guns? i like it! so should we just equip them with new gadgets that the scientists are rolling out or like surgically enhance them to be better, smarter, faster, stronger? (hehe if you dont mind the lyrics)

What does everyone think about killing Blade and making a new character who comes in and leads the flock?

    yes?

    no?

    cat, you are so vain


Pleeeeaaaaase answer... I'm really Maxed up right now!
  





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Wed Mar 19, 2008 9:16 pm
Layleun says...



Please no spoilers! A warning ahead of time, I haven't gotten the book yet. As for killing Blade, sure, why not.
  





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Wed Mar 19, 2008 9:19 pm
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ill try not to leak anything :wink: did i put any spoilers already?

haha!! yes! so what does everyone else think about killin Blade?

Am i being annoying? i can stop if you want, i just wanting to get this going. I have a lot of ideas suddenly..
  





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Wed Mar 19, 2008 9:25 pm
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I do think that someone should die, but that does not mean it has to be you.
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Wed Mar 19, 2008 9:52 pm
cat4prowl says...



Okay then it might as well be me, as long as no one minds me creating another character when she's gone...

So that brings us to how she should die, maybe the new and improved Erasers?
  





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Wed Mar 19, 2008 10:01 pm
Firestar says...



Yeah that works!
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Wed Mar 19, 2008 11:49 pm
cat4prowl says...



Okay then, Firestar and October Girl since Reed and Lexy are up in the air, why don't you guys introduce the new Erasers?

*prepares for a fight to the death*
  





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Fri Mar 21, 2008 4:45 pm
Blue Fairy says...



How is the new character going to come into the flock? where is she going to appear?

Are we just going to leave Blade's body were it is?
shall we find somewhere safe now?

:roll: so many questions
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Fri Mar 21, 2008 5:15 pm
cat4prowl says...



I had a way that I was going to bring in my character, but am I like out of the storybook now? Can I still make my new character and come in with dancingsprite?

Pleeeaaase?
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