okay people, i just read Maximum Ride: The Final Warning and am now in total Max mood. i notice that James Patterson usually balances run fight pause with annoying people who try to 'help' the flock, and the flock trying to find somewhere to kick back and relax.
That might be good.
Also, I find myself able to relate to Max really well. As in, I think a lot like her and I'm pretty sure I could almost sorta kinda write her. This is a problem. Blade=not Max!! I'm extremely tempted to have someone kill Blade off so I can bring in a new character that would be a lot like Max. But not a Max clone, because that would be annoying.
While I like Blade, especially her name, this could really help move the storybook along. Killing off Blade would bring a new kind of drama: sorrow. Then I could bring in a new character that has big ideas and sort of starts to lead the flock.
I like this idea, but I may not be in an exactly sane mood. I'm a Max freak right now.
Another thing that could help is bringing in a human that wants to help or a group of curious (annoying) humans. Or a new breed of Erasers/Flybots.
Just my brain leaking onto the page, let me know what you think!
I was thinking along the same lines. Let's take the Erasers to the future!! Mwa hahahahaaa. (sorry I had to get that out of my system) There are a group of test Erasers out with the newest gadgets. Such as night vision contacts and lightning guns.
Admiration: Our polite recognition of another's resemblance to ourselves.
Dopeler Effect: The tendency of stupid ideas to seem smarter when they come at you rapidly.
Confidence: the feeling a person has before he fully understands the situation.
night vision contacts and lightning guns? i like it! so should we just equip them with new gadgets that the scientists are rolling out or like surgically enhance them to be better, smarter, faster, stronger? (hehe if you dont mind the lyrics)
What does everyone think about killing Blade and making a new character who comes in and leads the flock?
yes?
no?
cat, you are so vain
Pleeeeaaaaase answer... I'm really Maxed up right now!
I had a way that I was going to bring in my character, but am I like out of the storybook now? Can I still make my new character and come in with dancingsprite?
Pleeeaaase?
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