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Tue Jan 01, 2008 6:11 am
Manny says...



This is the place for talking about plots for each individual character and the story as a whole. It'd be nice to have some Company members, both with and without powers (they get cool guns), to chase our heroes and villains around.
  





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Tue Jan 01, 2008 3:44 pm
Rubric says...



I've already created a characer.
I'll create a company person if I'm allowed to.
So you're going to kill a god. Sure. But what happens next?

Diary of a Deicide, Part One.


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Tue Jan 01, 2008 3:52 pm
Rydia says...



My character's flat mate will probably become a company character when I get around to introducing her.
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Tue Jan 01, 2008 4:10 pm
AyumiGosu17 says...



Umm...yeah, I've never seen or heard of Heroes, so could someone fill me? Could I still join, with my own character?
"Neglect not the gift that is in thee, which was given thee by prophecy, with the laying on of the hands of the presbytery." Timothy 4:14 KJV
  





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Tue Jan 01, 2008 4:28 pm
Rydia says...



I'm sure you could manage pretty well because we're not basing the storybook on the original plot. When you create your character just be careful to avoid elemental magic and such because in heroes the abilities are generally more sophisticated. Like there's regeneration, hearing others' thoughts, precognition, phasing, electric manipulation, adaptive muscle memory, manipulation of the space-time continuum, super-human strength etc.
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Tue Jan 01, 2008 4:53 pm
Manny says...



Yeah, you can make more than one character Rubric, but make sure you tell us which character you're writing for at the beginning of each post. Ayumi, just like kitty said you can join without knowing anything about Heroes. You could even be a regular person who witnesses all this crazy stuff.
  





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Wed Jan 02, 2008 3:36 am
AyumiGosu17 says...



Um, okay thanks! Thanks Kitty, thanks Mantis!
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Fri Jan 04, 2008 8:22 pm
Layleun says...



Layla's stuck in Ireland at the moment. Should I keep her there or have her move to somewhere closer to others?
  





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Fri Jan 04, 2008 8:34 pm
Rydia says...



I don't see any reason you shouldn't edge her closer to one or two of the others but make sure you find a logical reason for her to move.
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Fri Jan 04, 2008 8:52 pm
Layleun says...



Of course ^.^
  





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Tue Jan 08, 2008 2:20 am
RoryLegend says...



no one has been posting.. are we letting this storybook die? I really dont want to.. i like it. =[
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Sat Jan 12, 2008 6:22 pm
Rubric says...



On Principle I refuse to let this idea die.

Person who's character is heading toward me, I need a word as too your plans, unless such talk isnt the done thing. My characters may well be heading down the *bad ass* path, so be careful before you make friends.

Others who have lost interest:
Creating a character is a *Binding* legal contract, continue or faith the Wrath OF Rubric

*Maniacal Laughter*

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So you're going to kill a god. Sure. But what happens next?

Diary of a Deicide, Part One.


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Sun Jan 13, 2008 2:07 pm
Rydia says...



Ah, that would be my character.

As for plans, I was just looking for some character interaction.
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Mon Jan 14, 2008 12:51 pm
Rubric says...



Kitty, you did a great job on Sable, cheers for starting the character interaction


quick question
"What the hell? A cheater..."
refers to what exactly?

otherwise all good
So you're going to kill a god. Sure. But what happens next?

Diary of a Deicide, Part One.


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Mon Jan 14, 2008 4:00 pm
Rydia says...



By shapeshifter, did you mean that Desmond has the ability to shift shape as well as the other stuff or can he only alter his human appearance and heal? Only I thought he might change into a cheater to chase them faster but I just re-read the profile and I'm guessing that's not part of his ability?

If not, I'll delete that line.
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