Young Writers Society

Here we can discus anything and ask questions. We will also take about plot ideas okay. That's it for now, any questions?

What really makes a story flow?( really I think this a strange question but I want to see what others say)

Um, summer, this is for a storybook, not a novel. You know what one is right?

question are the two groups going to end up joining up?

question:

are bella and rask gonna do any more love scenes. . . coz. . . well. . . they're kinda gross ^^

and, um - yeah - I agree with sylverdawn - how are the groups gonna join up?

1- Cause, not Coz. Coz is internet slang, and really annoying.

2- Yes, Devil, Maybe and I plan on having a love interest in this. If it grosses you out...well...I don't know...

3- I was thinking Rask and I would end up with the other group, stealing the stuff again, but I'm not sure. My other thought was we could try to stop the group stealing stuff...and somehow meet up with the other other group...I can't explain what I"m saying all to well right now...

If we continue with the story I may be able to come up with a sequence of events to throw the two groups together. I'll be on the look out.

WRITERCHICK13 says: "3- I was thinking Rask and I would end up with the other group, stealing the stuff again, but I'm not sure. My other thought was we could try to stop the group stealing stuff...and somehow meet up with the other other group...I can't explain what I"m saying all to well right now..."

1) No offense, but the whole stealing from the King thing, is the only plot this storybook has at the moment, and if you try and stop it, you could very well be killing the story. And, also, no offense, but after Rask went back and saved Bella, I can't see how Kahlak will want to have you two back wit open arms.

2) If the groups meet up ---- it seems everyone is now at the inn, with Kahlak'tisht and the Kender outside the inn ---- can everyone just get along a little bit? Could someone write a scene with all the other people (excluding Kahlak'tisht and Flint) meeting at the inn so all the characters are re-introduced, restated and ect? That way at least everyone knows what everyone looks like, how they act and everything else. ----- if no-one objects, I could perhaps write this scene?

3) MERRY CHRISTMAS!

- jai -

-I don't like the idea of you writing the whole scene, Jai. That seems too...overruling, for lack of a better word. Also, please bare in mind that the post about stopping the stealing was from quite a while ago.

-I do like the idea of everyone meeting at the inn, however. Tis a good way to get some sort of storyline goign here. However, I think it should be started by one person, and continued by another. Not just one person writing the whole thing.


Merry Christmas--Felix Festus,

~Bella~

Seeing as the king's treasure is the only plot we have at the moment, why don't we put some kind of extremely powerful magic sword or something in there? Tavis (MadHatter) looks like a villain to me, if his profile's anything to go by, and he could go after the sword or whatever we make it. The plot would probably drive itself after that.

sounds cool I'll post something to help with that, but lets not be specific, like we don't know what the weapon is, we just know it's superstrong.

<Writer for Kahlak'tisht the orc>

That's cool guys, but I think you'll have to catch up with Kitnea who has the other half of the map - only the dragon rider would really be able to catch up with Kahlak and Flint ^^

Let Kahlak and Flint get to the Labyrinth guarding the King's Keep, and a bit through it before you catch up with us - maybe you guys can save Kahlak and Flint from a booby-trap - and then prove your worthiness by presenting the otherhalf of the map.

Please decide who'll be raiding the King's Keep now, so that other characters aren't left behind, and then have to catch up - which will be tres annoying.

Cheers!

- jai -

How saving them from a group of the King's men, because I can't see them getting all the way through the labyrinth with only half the map, and even with both halves it would still be heavily guarded, the source of the king's power being there and all.

Aside from that, I'm up to raiding the keep, that or hanging back with some kind of second group if anyone can think of a reason for one.

im up for raiding the king's keep. if only cause my character has a bone to pick with the king. As for that booby-trap, if it's gonna catch an orc and kender its got to be really bad. Any ideas. and how are we gonna catch up with kitnea.

~Bella the Mage~

I don't know about Maybe, (Rask the Drow Elf) but I think it would be fun if she and I tried to stop you guys. Not so much becuase we're the good guys who don't want you guys to rob the place, but because we're slightly worried. (Points at one of the posts) The innkeeper said something about the king obliterating all the magical creatures. Perhaps we're trying to keep that from happening to you?