To me, Zel's new post doesn't quite ring with the rest of the storybook. It's an awesome post, I just feel you rushed it along TOO far. The group's been traveling all of like five days, maybe a week maximum. The chances of meeting Zel's master out in the middle of a storm are pretty slim.
Here's my idea.
We take Zel's post and save it for later. After this night spent in the cave(Fand and I actually have a rather important event to write before the group leaves the cave), the storm clears and the group can travel unimpeded. I think someone should write a post that summarizes their journey. Two weeks of travel to get to the mountain Zel's master lives atop. Each character should be mentioned, maybe a couple of specific events that transpired during the journey. But I really think we need to make it evident that time has passed, and they've covered ground.
If no one else wants to make the post, I'll do it, of course, as long as everyone agrees with the idea.
Thoughts/Volunteers?
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