I'd actually really like if Blaze is the one to find her, too. I think it'd make for a nice moment Though, just one more thing @Lucrezia, will more kids be called into Mayhalm's office? I just figured since Odessa was that others will be too, and once Mary is found they might deduce she's the screamer and all that. Just wondering!
Aww, cute! Mary looks like she's finally given up 'talking sense' to them lol. And looking back seems to be Blaze's favorite angle.
Also, on another note, I just realized that I completely forget to add glasses onto Mary's design when I first made her and I'm only just remembering it! It might be too late to go and change that now...
I did not expect everyone to be so receptive to Mary, but it's super nice you guys like her! And don't worry, Ari. I'm pretty sure anything you make is gonna be awesome !
Oh, and just as a little funny done in boredom, well here's a thing I made of Odessa saying Mary isn't scary or intimating, to which Mary tries to prove her wrong. She fails, but she's got the spirit.
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And finally, about Odessa having irrational hate of Mary, I'd like to predict that the 2nd image is Mary and Odessa's relationship for (I'm guessing) 40% of the story.
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So, I just posted something of Blaze finding Mary and went in depth of her psyche and background and... Oml after writing and rereading it I am torturing this poor girl...
Oooh. Very exciting!! Can't wait for the downfall more of the headmistress!
Also uh, speaking of her... I'm in a bit of a dilemma. I'm still debating on whether or not Mary would be questioned by police or sent to Miss Mayhalm. I doubt I'd really be able to portray her, though, since she just arrived and all. Sooo... yeah. Any thoughts?
Yeah, there's no way I could do that. I could write fine maybe, and but trying her reactions to Mary being... Mary? Woof. I'd need a lot of guidance for just one bit of dialouge. So, I'll probably just go with something else
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