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A School Of Corrupted Ones (OOC)



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Wed Jan 18, 2023 5:18 am
NothingMore905 says...



i haven't come up with any teachers, the school basically looks like a castle
  





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Wed Jan 18, 2023 7:12 am
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Spearmint says...



My character’s been submitted! ^^
mint, she/her


.--. / ... ...- -.-. .-.. / - .--. ..- .- / .--- --- ...- .--- / .--- --- .--. .-- / .--. .--- .-.. / .--- -.-- .-.. .... -
=D
  





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Wed Jan 18, 2023 8:51 am
AkuRashomon says...



What those C20, C21, etc. mean?
rashomon go brr

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used to be loveissourgrapes
  





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Wed Jan 18, 2023 9:28 am
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AkuRashomon says...



ohh, interesting! i'll make a character c:
rashomon go brr

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Wed Jan 18, 2023 11:22 pm
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winterwolf0100 says...



Hey @NothingMore905! So sorry, but I actually think I might be a bit too busy to join this right now! It looks like a lot of fun though and I’ll keep a watch on everyone’s progress! You’ve got this!
he/she/they


winter you are an adorable bean and I love your bad social awareness xD ~Omni
omni played robin hood, stole winter's brain cell ~Silver
winter is the only person who would survive the machine uprising ~Europa
  





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Thu Jan 19, 2023 3:13 am
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Abcdefg1 says...



Hey NothingMore905, I've noticed that the responses you have posted on the RP are very short and dry, sometimes consisting of only a few words. It's making it kind of hard to write anything new...I don't know anything about Ai other than her schedule, her dorm room, and how she likes to paint and sculpt. I don't even know what she thinks of Melody. Does she like her? Does she think she's weird? It's impossible to tell.
Your responses are very concise, but they don't tell much about the characters, the setting, anything. It would be nice if you added some more development, it's starting to feel like you don't even want to be part of the RP, even though you created it.
All this to say; I think the concept is really cool and I want to build more on it! It's very creative and honestly not something I think I would have come up with on my own. We should keep it going!
  





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Thu Jan 19, 2023 3:19 am
NothingMore905 says...



sorry they're a bit short, but when someone else puts long paragraphs like that, it makes it a bit confusing for me but i will try to make them longer
  





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Thu Jan 19, 2023 3:23 am
NothingMore905 says...



i edited my response a bit, i hope thats long enough since i couldn't come up with any other ideas TwT
  





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Thu Jan 19, 2023 3:32 am
Abcdefg1 says...



I read it, well done! It's very good, thank you! ^-^
  





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Thu Jan 19, 2023 3:41 am
NothingMore905 says...



your welcome and thankyou
  





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Thu Jan 19, 2023 4:07 pm
Abcdefg1 says...



Lol, not autocorrect trying to change Dads to Dad's TwT
  





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Thu Jan 19, 2023 4:17 pm
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NothingMore905 says...



autocorrect sure is an annoyance
  





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Mon Jan 23, 2023 10:25 pm
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Abcdefg1 says...



We're coming up on 1,000 views! :)
  





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