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Wed Jul 13, 2022 8:50 am
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Liminality says...



Heya, just wanted to check if this would be okay:

I was planning a 'wild wacky route' for Siang Yi to take to the school. Could I say that Siang Yi lives around the Border Plains and she decides to take a shortcut to Ludus through the Borland Forest (let's say there was an abandoned underground railway system running through there, and she's taking advantage of the path of trees that were cleared for the abandoned project. why would they be clearing trees for something that runs underground? idk, maybe to reduce the weight, lol) Then just for extra detail at the tourist information centre she goes to look at the map, this is the long route that she chooses to avoid: Crabden -> Dolion -> train through Borsch -> Anwir -> Ludus

Does that work?
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Wed Jul 13, 2022 3:28 pm
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Spearmint says...



Yeah, that sounds good, Lim! There are a few small towns and rough roads in the Borland Forest (see the third map), but it would definitely be possible to have an abandoned underground railway system there too. And avoiding that long route makes sense. Best of luck to Siang Yi! C:


Also, great post, Harry! Sally is just aww :]
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Thu Jul 14, 2022 8:04 pm
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WeepingWisteria says...



Hey, @Spearmint? Do you have the orientation speeches planned?
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Thu Jul 14, 2022 8:08 pm
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Spearmint says...



I do not. XD I think we brainstormed that there would be demonstrations from two teachers, and I've partially written the message from the Deputy Headmaster, but most of it is unwritten for now haha.
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Fri Jul 15, 2022 1:01 pm
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Liminality says...



Woop second post is up! A bit long, sorry ^^' Hmm I was thinking one consequence of Siang Yi avoiding the tourist guide's help would be she falls into a sinkhole somewhere along the line? Though I'm not sure how that would fit into the pacing overall. Might just start the next post with her getting out of the sinkhole if everyone has made it to Lyndira or at least Ludus by then.

Edit: also, I could write a little something for the demonstrations or one of the speeches if needed? I'll pop some ideas in the pad in a bit c:
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Fri Jul 15, 2022 4:24 pm
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Spearmint says...



Awesome post, Lim! I caught that goose mention xD and no worries about the length! ^-^ As for the sinkhole, I'm thinking we can have another round of posts before orientation, so as long as it ends with Siang Yi getting to Lyndira, I think it's good. :] Also, I love the ideas you put for the demonstrations! :D
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Mon Jul 18, 2022 4:13 am
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KateHardy says...



This is a bit late but those posts look great!
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Tue Jul 19, 2022 4:37 am
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Spearmint says...



^ Yep! I love the interaction between Saturn and Cain, Wist and Teddy! :D
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Tue Jul 19, 2022 4:48 am
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WeepingWisteria says...



Thank you! They're pretty great together. XD
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Wed Jul 20, 2022 2:59 pm
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Liminality says...



Ah, after another long Siang Yi post she's kind of ready to *be* at the orientation. Maybe I'll skip over to her bursting into the auditorium at the beginning of my next post, and finding an empty seat next to whichever characters are already there, like Pren?
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Wed Jul 20, 2022 3:11 pm
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Spearmint says...



Woo! Awesome description of the sinkhole and Siang Yi's adventure. Also yep, that sounds great! :D
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Wed Jul 20, 2022 7:59 pm
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WeepingWisteria says...



Amazing post, Lim! Siang Yi is such a fun character.

Also, are you going on the pad today, Mint?
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Wed Jul 20, 2022 8:09 pm
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Spearmint says...



Oop! Yep! I'll be hanging out in the pad for the next few hours ^-^
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Thu Jul 21, 2022 9:19 am
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Liminality says...



Alright, cool! Super excited to have our characters interacting :D
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Fri Jul 22, 2022 4:18 am
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winterwolf0100 says...



Sending encouragement from the sidelines! Y'all are doing great!
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