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Tue Feb 01, 2022 9:12 pm
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Elinor says...



Okay cool! It might be slightly more than that because I made a slight adjustment so it's clear Caroline still has the bandage on her hand. Can't wait to see what you guys write! I figure it's not a big deal if we go over the weekly word count.

By the way, I figure this is worth mentioning, but I am going out for a play, so I may become very busy after February 7th. Hopefully, I get cast, and if I do, my posts might become shorter. I'll have a better sense of things afterwards, and if I decide I can't commit anymore, if we need to kill Caroline off or something or send her away some place and then bring her back when I become more free, depending on how long this goes for. I'm flexible.

I still want to continue with this storybook for as long as possible, and I'll do my best to make it work, but I don't want to get to the position where you guys are waiting on me and we don't hit the word count for whatever reason. I'll keep you all posted.

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Tue Feb 01, 2022 9:17 pm
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looseleaf says...



That's fine, Elinor! We'll figure out what to do when the time comes. I hope you get the part. <3
  





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Tue Feb 01, 2022 9:17 pm
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MailicedeNamedy says...



Thank you, Plume!

You can go third, but if you want to be last you have to wait until tomorrow. I´ve only going to add my character now and then I have to go. :)
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Tue Feb 01, 2022 9:26 pm
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Plume says...



I can wait till tomorrow!!
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Wed Feb 02, 2022 7:04 pm
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MailicedeNamedy says...



I posted. Your moment has come, Plume! :D
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Wed Feb 02, 2022 8:38 pm
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looseleaf says...



I loved your post, Mailice! It was super interesting.
  





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Wed Feb 02, 2022 8:51 pm
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Plume says...



Your post was delightful, Mailice! I’ll try to get mine up before tonight!
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Fri Feb 04, 2022 2:51 am
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Plume says...



Sorry to double post— I got my COVID booster shot the other day and it hit me pretty hard, so I don't think I'll have my post up tonight, either. I should have it up by tomorrow, though! So sorry for the delay!
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Fri Feb 04, 2022 7:24 am
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MailicedeNamedy says...



Get well soon! :D

These vaccinations are always so hard to bear. Every time I got the injection I was knocked out for three to five days. But the doctor said that´s good that the body reacts so intensive...
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Fri Feb 04, 2022 5:10 pm
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looseleaf says...



Guys, @MailicedeNamedy pointed out on my wall that we completely forgot to mention Hoover in any of our posts. :/ Maybe next post or one of the ones coming up we could mention him??
  





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Fri Feb 04, 2022 7:25 pm
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Plume says...



I can try and mention/feature Hoover. Just to clarify, though: is he going to be an inside dog and chill inside the Golden Vanderbilt, or does he just hang around the alleyway of the speakeasy?
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Fri Feb 04, 2022 7:28 pm
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MailicedeNamedy says...



Good question!

I guess it would be better to have him living in the alleyway, but maybe he´s living in the pharmacy and chills often outside for some days so that the owner only gives him food when he´s actually there.
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Fri Feb 04, 2022 7:37 pm
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looseleaf says...



That sounds good to me! I don't think he would be hanging around the bar and fancier area that often, but maybe the store front and such. :)
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2022 1:16 am
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Plume says...



Posted!! Did manage to get one mention of Hoover in there :D. It ended up being a little longer than expected. I did introduce some speakeasy staff and the like— if you disagree with anything/think of something I didn't, let me know! They were thought up on the fly, and I am more than happy to change any aspect!
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