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Fri Sep 10, 2021 4:08 am
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Elinor says...



@Magebird, I thought your reaction to her was just fine. Jean might just try to communicate with someone that will listen.

I was going to have Jean become Phoenix but I may have her hold off in doing so for now. For those of you who don't know how it works, the Phoenix force is a cosmic being that is only sometimes present in Jean. Phoenix attached herself to Jean after Jean's heart had stopped beating on an ill-fated mission. Basically, she is keeping Jean alive by remaining present within her.

The Dark Phoenix Saga happens after Jean is manipulated into "dating" this really creepy dude. There's a lot more to it, but the cliff notes is that after realizing she was manipulated, Phoenix realizes that humankind is corrupt, goes insane and destroys a planet. Jean sacrifices herself before Phoenix can come back.

What's cool about the story is that Phoenix's transformation to evil happens slowly, so it doesn't completely come out of the blue. It starts off with Jean doing things she wouldn't normally do -- ie, she manipulates a parent who wasn't going to let Xavier take his daughter to his school for gifted youngsters. In another, she temporarily holds back Cyclops' laser eye blasts so they can express how much they love each other and she can, for once, look into his eyes as they do. In yet another, she brazenly and unfairly accuses Cyclops of cheating because he had a conversation to another woman.

The reason I'm explaining all of this is Phoenix is a little bit like the relationship Doc Ock has with the mechanical arms, but it's a bit more complex. At the point I'm writing her at, Phoenix and Jean are one and the same, but sometimes she will be brazen or brash or even angry when she wouldn't have been before. But she's not evil, and Phoenix hasn't completely taken over to the extent that she does when she becomes Dark Phoenix, but sometimes she does. That'll be fun to play with in the RP, I think.

The other reason I'm bringing it up is the costume transformation is a mental thing that happens at the appropriate moment. Jean can change her street clothes too. Also, as Phoenix, she can fly. I'll know when the right time is for her to transform into the RP, but not yet.

The best way I can describe it say you know someone who has cancer. That cancer will always be a part of them, and it has changed their life forever. Sometimes, they'll behave differently because of their cancer. Some days, they may act completely normal, and you forget there's anything wrong. But the cancer is still there. And in spite of their illness, they're still the person you always knew. The analogy also works for a mental or another form of terminal illness.

... hope that makes sense. Let me know if it doesn't. It's a little hard to explain concisely, but it makes perfect sense in watching the cartoon or reading the comics.

Also, Mage, I'm curious as to how Alex knows about mutants if she only follows the MCU -- maybe she knows them vaguely?

I'll give other people a chance to respond and maybe Phoenix will jump into the fight somehow.

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Fri Sep 10, 2021 6:16 am
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KateHardy says...



Oooh, thanks for all the helpful info @Elinor! Hmm...very tempted to answer now...cause this is starting to get quite fun...but I'll wait for the other two to get their posts in first. :D
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Fri Sep 10, 2021 10:14 am
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Mageheart says...



@Elinor, that's what I was thinking! I had her mention them once in her fic before when she was trying to remember what metas were called, so I think she's aware of them but doesn't have too much info on them outside of them being X-Men related.
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oop been busy with work and health but ayy posted
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Ljungtroll says...



@Grimmwolf tis your turn! :D
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sorry for the wait! i posted ^^
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No worries! Who wants to go next?
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I did a lil' postie!!
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Who would like to go next?
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Tue Sep 14, 2021 12:22 am
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Mageheart says...



If @Elinor is cool with it, I could go next! I want to make sure Jean has a chance to react to Alex's reaction, but I'd be happy to have Alex + Jason react to Zara's comment!

(I also think it's really interesting how she reacted to their weapons. They don't seem too strange in comics, but I could see them being pretty jarring to a character from a more "realistic" live action show.)
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Tue Sep 14, 2021 3:52 am
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Elinor says...



Go ahead, @Magebird. I'll have Jean catch up. :)

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Mageheart says...



Okay! I'll see if I can get a post up tonight. :)
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Sat Sep 18, 2021 6:42 pm
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Elinor says...



Hi, I posted! It'd be great to keep moving along. We'll follow your lead, @GrandWild!

Also, here's what the transformation and the dichotomy between Phoenix and Jean actually looks like. Obviously she won't go all the way into space but you get the idea.

The second clips shows the beginnings of the darker side, which I want to dive into down the line.

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Mon Sep 20, 2021 11:49 pm
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Mageheart says...



I could post next! I just have a few quick questions about Phoenix/Jean. Is she speaking aloud right now, or is she still talking to just Alex? Also, can the others see her now? I started writing a post, but I realized I wasn't sure if I needed to have Jason freak out at the transformation, too. :P
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Mon Sep 20, 2021 11:56 pm
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Go for it, Mage! I'll make a post after you.
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