I really liked the idea of Rune using that first set of remnants as a warm-up, but I also wanted him to push himself too hard by trying to control other people on top of his own reanimation. So I let him do both.
xD...I love how you both said "little postie" when they there were in fact properly giant posts. Be still my heart...
Anyway, ahhh...I love the action happening right now, both descriptions are awesome and I love how both Rune and Lyrth just kinda of levelled up there, and are both close to exhaustion.
ANyway, we're just waiting on @TheMythMaster to fire in his little postie and then woohoo..maze entry time...well I'm excited for it, I've never written this transformation before, and had to properly delve in a situation Harry's genuinely afraid of, so this is really going to be quite a post. Soo ahh...hope you guys are as excited as I am.
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Ahhh...I love how the fight has just gotten the perfect point for Harry to do his thing, and also how everyone's naturally helping each other.
Also ahhhh..yes..that's a pretty neat comparison...anyway, here goes the next post. It ended up being wayyyy longer than I initially anticipated but I'm happy with how it came out...not too bad for my first time writing that particular transformation..xD Well it's time to jump into that maze...well unless you're Rune...if you're Rune, you probably want to follow Jen's advice there.
Oh and well, now Jennifer, and well The Frost's shield should take most of the edge off, but the feeling of standing next to a full power celestial will be extremely uncomfortable. Its a bit like in Percy Jackson when a god assumes their true form but this is like if a titan assumed their true form, just being near will vaporize you...but the shield here is preventing most of that energy, so its just a lot of discomfort.
Also uhh in case it wasn't clear, this isn't quite Harry right now. The Darkness is a bit of a separate being, and they have the pronouns [they/them].
At any rate, very soon, we're all gonna be in that maze...and ahh..I can't wait for that to get started. It should be fun. I have almost managed to properly finalize what this first obstacle will be like...
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I love that transformation scene! It was really good for your first time writing it.
I'm also really excited to enter the maze now that Jennifer and Harry know Rune's secret! It was really fun figuring out his reaction to that reveal—I'm still not entirely sure if he felt that way because of The Darkness or because he was having a panic attack.
And ahh....the reaction by Rune was great!! I can't wait to see what the others have to say as we jump into the maze now..
Ooh also I forgot to mention this earlier but once they jump in, they'll be falling pretty much normally for a few thousand feet Sorry everyone before they hit the slow falling spells which Yes it is shamelessly copied from Minecraft's slow falling potion should make them float down and land a place that feels somewhat like a soft matress. And their immediate surroundings will just be blank blackness. The maze itself is deactivated when the doors are open. Things will only start to appear once Harry closes the door and jumps in, and once he does that they will begin to see a small passageway.
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I think you managed to get enough of the essentials
Tiny nitpick is that I don't think Felix would actually know it was The Darkness or The Frost cause no one told him but its tiny enough that its fine if you don't want to change that
Anyway, lovely post:D I threw in a quick reply. Aaand now it's up to @SoullessGinger to get Lyrth down...xD...and then the secret shenanigans to ensure Rune gets down without anything secrets being exposed shall begin.
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