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Sat Jan 22, 2022 12:23 am
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JamesPeterson says...



Alright, real quick, I just want you guys to know I made a change to the world, so check out the storybook for details.
First, there is the addition of the Pearl Demon :D They have four arms, and are pretty common. (If you really want to change to that, you can, but.... well revision :P)
Second, the source of all demon's magic is called the Tenebris now, so thats a thing. I don't know if that will be important, but it can come up in reference to enrich the world and such.
Third and final, demons hearts are their types. So a ruby has a large, magical ruby looking crystal instead of a beating heart. This gives them life and a connection to the Tenebris.

Phew, there! Now, to work on the next post I go! :)
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Sat Jan 22, 2022 12:58 am
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winterwolf0100 says...



Okay, sounds awesome!
And when the day shifts to night,
The wild wolf calls to me,
And I am not afraid.
I fear the darkness far more than I fear his claws


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Sat Jan 22, 2022 4:58 am
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winterwolf0100 says...



First part of the post looks great, James! (Only question I had was since they’re in hell, would he say “whatever god is out there”, or would he just say “god”? Or possibly Satan? Hmm…)
And when the day shifts to night,
The wild wolf calls to me,
And I am not afraid.
I fear the darkness far more than I fear his claws


~~~GENDERFLUID, ASEXUAL, OMNIROMANTIC~~~

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Sat Jan 22, 2022 5:25 am
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JamesPeterson says...



Well for this hell, I don't think there's actually a Satan. One idea I had was that lots of people over the years try to claim to be and try to take control of Hell or whatever.
I had him say whatever God because he doesn't know what God he believes in, whether it's Satan or something else. Just his character I suppose haha.
But thanks :D
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Sat Jan 22, 2022 5:27 am
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One issue im trying to avoid is giving Risius plot armor or 'main character energy' haha. His abilities seem powerful but I've come up with some equal downsides I think. And he does have his abilities for a reason, so that's not just cause I didn't want to choose one of the nine variants.
Just something I need to be careful of.
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Sun Jan 23, 2022 2:52 am
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Spearmint says...



The world changes look good, and I like the first part of the post, James! Duct tape is indeed wonderful xD
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Sat Feb 05, 2022 5:36 am
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winterwolf0100 says...



How’s the next part of the post coming along? : )
And when the day shifts to night,
The wild wolf calls to me,
And I am not afraid.
I fear the darkness far more than I fear his claws


~~~GENDERFLUID, ASEXUAL, OMNIROMANTIC~~~

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Thu Feb 10, 2022 5:11 am
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Ok, sorry about that, its gonna be up by the end of the week! :D
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Tue May 10, 2022 1:08 am
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winterwolf0100 says...



Heyyyy! So time definitely didn't slip away from me >.> you doing alright, @JamesPeterson?
And when the day shifts to night,
The wild wolf calls to me,
And I am not afraid.
I fear the darkness far more than I fear his claws


~~~GENDERFLUID, ASEXUAL, OMNIROMANTIC~~~

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