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Beneath the Hero [OOC]



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Sun Mar 28, 2021 2:58 pm
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JamesPeterson says...



Ok, I have changed it. The memory power I chose was going to play into his character, but I think this could do the same. Besides, illusory magic is great for cover ups...
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Sun Mar 28, 2021 3:07 pm
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yosh says...



Yes! I love illusions! That is awesome! You can get a first post up if you like. @JamesPeterson
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Sun Mar 28, 2021 3:10 pm
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JamesPeterson says...



Sweet! Thanks. I will post here in maybe an hour or so when I can use my PC.
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Sun Mar 28, 2021 3:56 pm
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Hazel Williams says...



Hi. I'm Hazel Williams, and I wanted to join if you have any more slots. the story looks cool. Here is my character.
Spoiler! :
Name: Rose

Age: 14

Appearance: crimson red hair

Role: Hero

Magic: Rose can bond up to two weapons at a time. What this means is she can throw the weapons and warp to their location. (May or may not work with bullets/arrows, up to you.)

Personality: Fiery personality. Sarcasm and insults are like compliments from her.

Other:

:D I will join if I can
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Sun Mar 28, 2021 4:40 pm
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JamesPeterson says...



@Yoshikrab
Is it alright if I do a bit of worldbuilding of my own? Adding on to your premise a bit, but giving the world some more life.
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Sun Mar 28, 2021 4:41 pm
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yosh says...



@JamesPeterson sure! Just run anything huge by me before posting, kay?

you can join! @Hazel Williams
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Sun Mar 28, 2021 4:45 pm
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kk, nothing huge yet I think.
Thanks
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Sun Mar 28, 2021 5:05 pm
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JamesPeterson says...



@Yoshikrab
I sent my first post, tell me if there is anything wrong with it. :D
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Sun Mar 28, 2021 7:07 pm
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yosh says...



@JamesPeterson could you change the contents of the letter to add the fact that Tev needs to get under the first "O" in the Hollywood sign.

Other than that, it's a great post!
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Sun Mar 28, 2021 7:26 pm
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@Yoshikrab
Oop, I will do that... Sorry
:)
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Mon Mar 29, 2021 2:59 am
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JamesPeterson says...



@Yoshikrab
I would like to make this for the world

Outlanders:
After the apocalypse, cities could only handle so much, so they rejected those they didn't like. These became known as the Outlanders (may be changed to Exiles).
The Outlanders manage to survive in the harsh wasteland of the post-apocalyptic world.
The cities have very strict defenses, so they can't just get in, or sneak in.
I'm also thinking there could be a few main cities in the world. Basically the last refuges of mankind after the apocalypse.
Los Angeles would obviously be one.
The others could be up to you.
:)
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Mon Mar 29, 2021 1:02 pm
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yosh says...



Hmmm we could try to incorporate something similar in the story, but this is supposed to be more like a near-future rp, so not TOO crazy if you know what I mean. But the exiled people is a pretty good idea. I'm just a little unsure about an apocolypse
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Mon Mar 29, 2021 1:20 pm
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@Yoshikrab
I thought it was a post apocalyptic world, though? Maybe I read it wrong....
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Mon Mar 29, 2021 1:21 pm
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Ok, it says near apocalyptic, sorry. :)
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Mon Mar 29, 2021 4:46 pm
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yosh says...



@JamesPeterson It's ok! There's nothing wrong with misinterpreting stuff. I do it all the time!
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