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Mon Jan 11, 2021 10:58 pm
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winterwolf0100 says...



Okay so @ChesTacos, I’m open to the possibility, but currently I’ve got Catherine as a very closed off individual so it would take quite a long time to work up to that, and Charlotte would have to be very persistent about wanting to be friends. If they were roomed together that would help significantly, but I feel like I’d need to move at a slow pace of trusting her in order to feel like I’m actually portraying her accurately. She hasn’t grown close to anyone since her supposed death in 1863, and right before that her brother was horrifically killed, so she’s got a lot of trauma that she’ll need to work through before she even considers opening up to anyone.
  





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Mon Jan 11, 2021 11:09 pm
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OK, I'll keep that in mind
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Mon Jan 11, 2021 11:14 pm
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I just realized for Charlotte the tense changes so just ignore that lol
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Mon Jan 11, 2021 11:36 pm
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TheRealEuphoria says...



@ChesTacos Rosetta is also on the plane. I was in the middle of my post with Rosetta sitting next to Catherine, but eventually she moves next to Charlotte when Rose starts badgering her
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Tue Jan 12, 2021 12:28 am
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Oh OK, maybe have Rosetta come after Charlotte and just have Charlotte move to sit next to Rosetta cause Catherine keeps ignoring her?
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Tue Jan 12, 2021 7:15 am
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Did you like my character Aggie I just thought that there should be some fun and adventurous character in the storybook who would like to know the secrets of the palace and unfold it.
  





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Tue Jan 12, 2021 3:18 pm
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TheRealEuphoria says...



@ChesTacos, that wouldn't work either, I have Aiden moving next to Rosetta after Catherine moves.

@winterwolf0100 And I were thinking that maybe Rosetta could bring up the factories that Catherine's little brother died in, on purpose because she's a bully like that. Eventually the plane would change density and it would start to plummet until Amelia neutralizes her gifts. As of right now I have everyone entering the plane, boys on the left and girls on the right and eventually Aiden moves behind Catherine and Rosetta. Once Catherine gets annoyed enough she'll get up and move next to Charlotte; and then Aiden moves into the seat that Catherine was sitting in.

I would try and change it around for you but I feel like the conversation between Aiden and Rosetta is super important for the plot. Would Charlotte sit by herself in the beginning of the plane ride? And then when Catherine moves you could include that dialogue you put in your post @ChesTacos.

Also, @ImaginativeAlice, I like Aggie! So, she's not immortal am I correct?
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Tue Jan 12, 2021 3:54 pm
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Yes I think its not important for everyone to be immortal.
  





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Tue Jan 12, 2021 3:58 pm
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Yoshikrab says...



goodness gracious @ImaginativeAlice and I thought my character was OP . . .
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Tue Jan 12, 2021 4:02 pm
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winterwolf0100 says...



Ooh, I’m very interested where you take Aggie, because most of these characters seem like they’re all hiding their secrets. Catherine would be mortified to find out someone else was looking through her mind via dreams, and Aiden would instantly snap at them, because he’s actually pretty open about everything, but it’s the breach of privacy that annoys him.
  





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Tue Jan 12, 2021 4:27 pm
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I think Charlotte would become scared of her finding out about her past and Tommy would get pretty mad.
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Tue Jan 12, 2021 4:56 pm
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ImaginativeAlice says...



Thanks @Yoshikrab I didn't thought you all will like my character.

Yeah I also thought that it would be interesting and fun way to find their past through there dreams.
  





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Tue Jan 12, 2021 6:06 pm
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winterwolf0100 says...



@ImaginativeAlice that is a smart way to get into their past, but for both my characters I’d say I want to be careful about how often I reveal things like that. Also, dreams aren’t always rational, so you may have to consult with the authors of the characters and they can probably tell you how the dream would be like, because dreams are such a part of the subconscious that you have to really understand a character to try to tackle their dream world.
  





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Tue Jan 12, 2021 6:09 pm
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ImaginativeAlice says...



You are right @winterwolf0100 ofcourse I won't do anything with the pasts of the other characters without consulting them.
  





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Tue Jan 12, 2021 7:57 pm
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TheRealEuphoria says...



I went ahead and posted for Rosetta.
I was going to post a time lapse where they got to the castle as well, but I feel like there was enough drama for one post Lol.
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