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Sun Jan 10, 2021 2:17 pm
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ChesTacos says...



Yeah sure that would work!!!
  





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Sun Jan 10, 2021 2:20 pm
winterwolf0100 says...



If she bumped into him, would that be enough to antagonize him if he perceived it as something she did on purpose, or would she need to say something?
  





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Sun Jan 10, 2021 2:30 pm
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ChesTacos says...



She would have to say something offensive towards him. Basically using your animal comparisons to wolves and such, it's a fight or flight instinct but he doesn't fly. Like an eye for an eye. If she were to bump into him on purpose his reaction would be to just shove her at the most.
  





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Sun Jan 10, 2021 2:33 pm
winterwolf0100 says...



Okay, I think I’ve got an idea.
  





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Sun Jan 10, 2021 3:28 pm
winterwolf0100 says...



Alright, so @ChesTacos, I edited it to include something that might reasonably allow him to say something like that, if you could look that over at some point. If it still doesn't work, we can try to come up with another idea! I wanted for her to have an idea of who he is just so the characters can know each other a little more, creating more interesting interactions, and it would be pretty difficult to remove him from the post at this point, but we can definitely work to find some other way to involve him if it really doesn't fit him.

Also, if you decide you're interested, I know she would be annoyed if he called her poodle continually in all interactions just based on this one. But if you don't think he would, then he doesn't have to.
  





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Sun Jan 10, 2021 3:35 pm
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ChesTacos says...



Yeah I think that seems like something Thomas would do I think that will work
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Sun Jan 10, 2021 3:37 pm
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ChesTacos says...



So I've noticed that sometimes people make more than once character. Can I do that and if I can should I?
  





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Sun Jan 10, 2021 3:41 pm
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Of course you can! Whether you should is up to your discretion.
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Sun Jan 10, 2021 7:29 pm
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TheRealEuphoria says...



Yes @Lia5Giba! Please check into the WriterFeedPad and go ahead and submit your character profile. The deadline for the first post and character profile is Wednesday!

I’m glad you find interest in this SB! :)

Also, @winterwolf0100 I love Catherine already! :3
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Mon Jan 11, 2021 5:13 am
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ScarlettFire says...



Hiiii, co-creator of YWU here...Uh.... So, how, exactly, does this fit into the YWU when it's modern earth?? *is confused*
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Mon Jan 11, 2021 6:58 pm
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TheRealEuphoria says...



I apologize, I completely misunderstood the tag! It's changed now :) @ScarlettFire
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Mon Jan 11, 2021 7:32 pm
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ChesTacos says...



Is there a way to place images in the posts in the storybook without using an image link?
  





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Mon Jan 11, 2021 8:02 pm
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TheRealEuphoria says...



Yes @ChesTacos. There's a tab at the bottom that says attachment and you can upload any image from your computer as long as it's 256 Kib. Just press "place inline" when it's uploaded :)
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We should start thinking of friendships, enemies, etc. Once again for those not checked into the WFP please do so. The link is on the first post of the DT.

From what I've read it's pretty Clear Thomas and Catherine and Aiden are not going to get along. But @winterwolf0100 & @ChesTacos what if eventually your two characters had to work together at some point? This could be interesting. On the WFP @Yoshikrab and I are starting the plot, I wanted to see if the conflict could start there?
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Mon Jan 11, 2021 8:14 pm
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ChesTacos says...



@winterwolf0100

I want Charlotte and Catherine to become close what do you think?
  





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Mon Jan 11, 2021 8:43 pm
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TheRealEuphoria says...



also, on the WFP I added a Gift Description area. I already wrote out your characters and gifts. I just need you to fill them in more detailed! This will make it easier for us to write about them. Thank you!
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