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The Order: Gifted [OOC]



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Tue Mar 02, 2021 5:40 pm
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ChesTacos says...



Is it OK if my character swears?
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Tue Mar 02, 2021 5:45 pm
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winterwolf0100 says...



Since the original creator of the storybook has left and @Yoshikrab is the person who now has control of the book currently, it’s up to them ultimately, but I would say that they’re teenagers or mentally older, so cursing seems natural. We don’t want to overuse it since that can lesson the effects of it, and maybe we should refrain from using a lot of f-bombs, but I don’t personally see the harm in a few select curse words.
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Tue Mar 02, 2021 6:33 pm
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yosh says...



winter is right

swearing is fine, but there will be some restricting if it's overused
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so i took another nap
  





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Fri Mar 05, 2021 5:54 pm
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ChesTacos says...



(Not me forgetting Thomas's power <.<)
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Fri Mar 05, 2021 6:39 pm
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ChesTacos says...



I edited Charlotte's post and added Thomas's below
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Fri Mar 05, 2021 6:42 pm
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winterwolf0100 says...



It all looks great! : D so I guess that means I’m up to post for Aiden then!
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omni played robin hood, stole winter's brain cell ~Silver
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Sat Mar 06, 2021 5:11 am
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DreamyAlice says...



Yeah after Aiden finally its Aggie's turn!
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Mon Mar 08, 2021 7:54 pm
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winterwolf0100 says...



I know it took a few days, but Aiden's new post is officially out! Hope y'all enjoy, and I always love comments and feedback so if you have any feel free to let me know!
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winter you are an adorable bean and I love your bad social awareness xD ~Omni
omni played robin hood, stole winter's brain cell ~Silver
winter is the only person who would survive the machine uprising ~Europa
  





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Mon Mar 08, 2021 8:14 pm
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ChesTacos says...



It was...interesting in a scary way. Also Thomas likely wouldn't say anything, he would just watch.
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Tue Mar 09, 2021 5:04 am
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For an Aiden post, that is honestly one of the best compliments I could receive lol, @ChesTacos. I’ll also edit it so he doesn’t say anything. Thanks!
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omni played robin hood, stole winter's brain cell ~Silver
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Tue Mar 09, 2021 7:35 am
DreamyAlice says...



Aiden's posts are always interesting to read. I will be posting for Aggie soon.
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Tue Mar 09, 2021 9:57 pm
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yosh says...



Also, Cloud probably wouldn't have interfered, @winterwolf0100, but I would prefer if you made him have a little less emotion over it and a little more passive because Cloud really couldn't care less over the death of Jared, or anyone for that matter.

On a happier note, maybe Cloud had /recognized/ the pathokinesis and was like /wait a minute/.
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Sat Mar 13, 2021 5:05 pm
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yosh says...



@ImaginativeAlice

I mean he has an interesting power, space-time manipulation, he can eat an ice-cream a million times, just by reversing the time every time it is finished, so cool!


. . .

this is the first thing that aggie thinks of eh?
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Sat Mar 13, 2021 5:08 pm
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DreamyAlice says...



@Yoshikrab Yeah, she never thinks about the dangerous part of the gift
Last edited by DreamyAlice on Mon Mar 15, 2021 4:52 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Sat Mar 13, 2021 5:09 pm
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DreamyAlice says...



@ChesTacos I have used Charlotte in my post if you didn't liked anything about it you can tell me I can edit it.

And guys how was the post?
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