Young Writers Society

Cloud is old boy

Something I hav planned for the future is Charlotte getting really mad and accidently screaming. And it'll be like a plot twist since everyone thinks shes mute but thats like in the faaaarrrrrrrr future

Ooh interesting! Does her scream always kill people or can it just injure them sometimes?

It doesn't always kill people, it depends on how loudly she screams, it can kill people or just injure them

@winterwolf0100, Kendrick was on the plane, yeah. At least I think he was. He had one line and not much else. But if you wanna do a cameo, sure! Definitely down for it.

Also why is Kendrick scary I have to write him more cute and nice now nooooo

Gee I wonder why it's not like he burned his teacher alive XD

Okay, okay, okay, got it. Just... don’t betray Kendrick and he won’t get revenge. Heh?

The thing with Aiden is that he’s charming and nice to everyone unless it doesn’t go his way. As soon as you do something he doesn’t like, he turns cold and mean, and it’s such a contrast that he uses it to condition the people around him to think it’s their fault when he turns cold and distant, so really, if they do everything right (i.e. HIS way), then he won’t have to be mean to them or hurt them. And given his powers, people usually want to stay on his good side, so they kind of begin to internalize the idea that if he’s unhappy it’s somehow their fault. He’s a manipulative bastard, but he’s good at what he does.

He is manipulative but clearly not to catherine or charlie aka charlotte

I’m trying to think of more ways I can incorporate Jared into the plot. Any ideas?

Maybe have him be there when they arrive and he helps train them?

Jared could catch Aiden with Nubia if you want.

Made a sorta book cover thingy for The Order cause I got bored lol

And here's a second one

Ahhh I love them!!