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Tue Oct 27, 2020 4:19 am
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HarryHardy says...



A timeskip would be good...maybe they can pass by the lake that Lia is in so that she can join them?
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Wed Oct 28, 2020 8:08 pm
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Rosewood says...



I was just thinking, because the Adventurers are about to enter the Forest, could they perhaps run into Cassie? (This would be me posting after @HarryHardy)
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Wed Oct 28, 2020 8:37 pm
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LordMomo says...



Yeah we can make that work! We're gonna do a time-skip though so one of the other roleplayers could write that scene. Also, in the WFP that @RavenLord made, you asked about the language? Please keep that to a minimum. Maybe she could have curses related to the Forest? Like, "Oh, nymph dung," or something like that. :D
  





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Wed Oct 28, 2020 9:02 pm
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Rosewood says...



@LordMomo, no I understand! I think that could actually work because she seems like the type to use 'creative curses' like that. :)
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Tue Nov 03, 2020 4:38 am
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spunkyspacekitty says...



@LordMomo when are you going to post?
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Thu Nov 05, 2020 4:30 pm
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Rosewood says...



I can :D
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Thu Nov 05, 2020 6:14 pm
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Rosewood says...



Posted! Who's next?
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Thu Nov 05, 2020 6:18 pm
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RavenLord says...



Great post, @Rosewood! In the future though, try not to control the other characters. That's called godmodding and is generally frowned upon in roleplays.
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Thu Nov 05, 2020 8:07 pm
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Rosewood says...



Oh sorry, I didn't know! :shock:
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Thu Nov 05, 2020 8:16 pm
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RavenLord says...



It's okay, I know you're new at this :D
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Sat Nov 07, 2020 6:09 pm
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Magebird says...



This is belated, but I agree with what @RavenLord said! Your post looked awesoem, @Rosewood. <3 It's good to avoid writing other people's characters because you can never really predict how they will react, but there's nothing wrong with learning through experience.

I can try getting a post up next!
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