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Wed Oct 21, 2020 7:16 am
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JasmineFelicia says...



I posted a thingy. I hope you all like it. If you don't like how I wrote some of the characters please tell me.
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Wed Oct 21, 2020 8:44 am
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Vincian says...



You're all off to a great start! Keep it going!!
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Wed Oct 21, 2020 9:20 am
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soundofmind says...



THaNK U VINCIAN/OMNOM <3

Solid post Jasmine! I like how Liam initiated a little icebreaker in hopes of building trust, haha. I'm imagining Magnolia participating very stiffly/without much enthusiasm and Levi being more upbeat lol

He motion do the big man who only had one eye. The guy grumbled something under his breath, but then began,
"Call me Bo. I'm 26. I don't suppose this matters but- I'm allergic to cats."

Only little nitpick here is I don't think Bo would grumble! Maybe... mumbled? I KNOW ITS NOT A HUGE CHANGE BUT WORDS HAVE DIFFERENT MEaNINGS aSKLFHGdjhd

Also I totally imagine Bo would be mumbling about how he doesn't think introductions will help Adeline trust him because she already seems to have made up her mind about him lol
  





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Wed Oct 21, 2020 9:55 am
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JasmineFelicia says...



Ok! Will do!
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Wed Oct 21, 2020 12:54 pm
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LZPianoGirl says...



You wrote Adeline super well!
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Wed Oct 21, 2020 1:31 pm
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soundofmind says...



@Corvid AAAA I LOVED YOUR POST YAYYYYYYYY

Magnolia’s sarcasm makes me happy
  





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Wed Oct 21, 2020 1:56 pm
LZPianoGirl says...



It was great!! I'm in school right now but I'll try to get a post out by the end of they day!
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Wed Oct 21, 2020 4:29 pm
LZPianoGirl says...



Alright, I posted it! @JasmineFelicia, I assumed Liam was from the USA, but please correct me if I'm wrong!
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JasmineFelicia says...



You're right! He is is from the USA! Also, I loved all y'alls posts.
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Wed Oct 21, 2020 4:57 pm
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JasmineFelicia says...



Also, We should probably figure out what's one everyone's papers.
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Wed Oct 21, 2020 5:40 pm
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LZPianoGirl says...



Uh, so one person has to have the guy/gal's name on it, and then the others are just objects. I can't really think of any objects (except the frisbee @Tenyo suggested), though.

I was thinking for Adeline's engine they could just steal the car that was near the farmhouse (if one of them can drive a stick), and then they can just use the car until they get to the scientists, where they can take out the engine.
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Wed Oct 21, 2020 7:17 pm
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Tenyo says...



Do we want to set up a discord or WFP role-play chat at some point? It might be a fun way for our characters to get to know each other and we can put a scene together. Maybe they ask a bunch of questions to see if there is any correlation as to why they particularly ended up there.
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Wed Oct 21, 2020 7:49 pm
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LZPianoGirl says...



I can set up a WFP and some questions as soon as I get home!
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Wed Oct 21, 2020 8:36 pm
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LZPianoGirl says...



Here you go! I also put it in the first post of the DT.
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Wed Oct 21, 2020 10:50 pm
soundofmind says...



RANDOM BUT BO CAN DRIVE STICK
  








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