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Mon Oct 19, 2020 4:25 pm
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JasmineFelicia says...



I loved it!
Hi, the name is Jasmine, but you can call me Jaz! Nice to meet you :D !
  





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Mon Oct 19, 2020 9:41 pm
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LZPianoGirl says...



I was thinking we'd go in the order that we joined (so @soundofmind would be next), but we can do something else!
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Mon Oct 19, 2020 10:34 pm
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JasmineFelicia says...



Yeah. That seems like a good idea.
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Tue Oct 20, 2020 6:11 am
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soundofmind says...



So sorry I'm replying to all of this late!! The last few days (er, week) has been pretty wild for me but I'm getting back on the YWS horse? Uh, what's that metaphor... ANYWAYS I'm going to be more involved and I'm HERE FOR THIS!! I WANNA START STRONG

@LZPianoGirl I loved your post!!! It was a solid introduction and I loved the descriptions!

I'll write up my post today or early tomorrow morning! So it should be up very soon so we can get the ball rolling! :)

Quick question though: I have a reason for the thump Adeline hears prepared lol but should I assume everyone is scattered around this barn? Also, if anyone's around to collaborate let me know! I think I want to include Magnolia, if that's okay, @Corvid? And I'll probably slip Liam and Levi in at the end! (Just realized that's two L names haha)

With all of our character's names... we could make an acronym... BALLM? MALLB? LABLM? LOL I don't know. ANYWAYS

I will get to writing soon ;)

@Tenyo - I know you don't have an official CP up but I hope it's okay that I consult the unofficial one you enspoilered in the DT :)
  





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Tue Oct 20, 2020 11:56 am
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LZPianoGirl says...



thank you! and uuuhhhh yeah i think everyone's scattered around the barn.
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Tue Oct 20, 2020 2:12 pm
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Corvid says...



@soundofmind it's okay to include Magnolia! can't wait to see what you come up with!
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Tue Oct 20, 2020 4:54 pm
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Tenyo says...



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Go for it! I've just gone with that original one anyway.
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Tue Oct 20, 2020 5:01 pm
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Tenyo says...



I'm aware that we need to do 2 posts each to stay in the LSS, it might make it difficult to reach our target by Monday if we wait too long in between posts. Unless we have the option of briefly taking a character aside to do a private monologue whilst waiting?
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Tue Oct 20, 2020 6:26 pm
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LZPianoGirl says...



Yeah, at the rate we're going it's going to be hard to stay in LSS. I think the monologue idea is good!
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Tue Oct 20, 2020 9:42 pm
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Tenyo says...



I added in Levi's first post, but it's pretty much him lying on the ground so it shouldn't disrupt @soundofmind 's post-in-progress.

Do we add time/location to the header with our character names in this one?
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Tue Oct 20, 2020 9:48 pm
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LZPianoGirl says...



I loved your post! I don't think it's necessary to add time/location to the headers, but if you want to, go ahead.
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Tue Oct 20, 2020 9:56 pm
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Tenyo says...



@LZPianoGirl

Thankyou ^_^
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Wed Oct 21, 2020 1:47 am
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LZPianoGirl says...



Alright, I think for this first round of posts it'd be better to just post whenever we're ready. I know I said the opposite of this yesterday, but seeing as the deadline's on Sunday, I think it'd be best to try to get them done as quick as possible.

So, @Corvid, @JasmineFelicia, and @soundofmind, feel free to start/post your posts whenever you have the time within the next few days! After that we'll start from the top and keep going in the order that we posted (hopefully that makes sense), if that's OK!
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Wed Oct 21, 2020 2:02 am
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soundofmind says...



SO SORRY FOR THE WAIT!! I just got my post up! everyone please let me know if I wrote your characters okay! Hopefully the length is alright too!!

ALSO TENYO I LOVED YOUR POST AND LEVI'S sELF REFLECTIONS
  





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Wed Oct 21, 2020 2:24 am
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LZPianoGirl says...



Oh my god i LOVED your post sound! you wrote adeline perfectly!
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