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An Unexpected Time {DT}



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Wed Nov 18, 2020 8:20 pm
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soundofmind says...



did i have any idea what i was doing? maybe not, but I figured my next post could be the "where the gun" post and I used this one to set that up instead

HOPEFULLY THIS WORKS I WAS JUST WINGING IT
I'm less confident on this one, so let me know if there's things about your characters I should change
  





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Wed Nov 18, 2020 8:35 pm
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LZPianoGirl says...



i LOVED it!! this line made me laugh:
"Shh! You're interrupting this very riveting news report on the price of butter."

mags has such a great sense of humor lol. I'll try to get my post out by the end of the day, but I can't guarantee that :\
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Wed Nov 18, 2020 11:35 pm
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hahah THANK U :,)

also i look forward to ur post when u get it up LZ! :)
  





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Wed Nov 18, 2020 11:46 pm
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Corvid says...



great post, sound!
i for one welcome this report on butter
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Thu Nov 19, 2020 2:02 am
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Posted! I hope it's alright, I rushed to write it a bit.
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Thu Nov 19, 2020 2:12 am
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soundofmind says...



I like it! I'm glad Adeline and Mags got a moment to sit together!! We haven't really seen them interact much directly :)
  





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Fri Nov 20, 2020 3:53 pm
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LZPianoGirl says...



@JasmineFelicia, I think it's your turn to post.
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Fri Nov 20, 2020 6:05 pm
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soundofmind says...



Since we’re nearing the weekend, I can write up a post and split it into two (or three!) When it comes to me again! Just to get our number up since we’ve only got 4/10
  





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Fri Nov 20, 2020 6:17 pm
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LZPianoGirl says...



Sounds good! I don't know if I'll be able to do that too (I have loads of Literature work), but I'll try!
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Fri Nov 20, 2020 7:29 pm
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JasmineFelicia says...



Oh! Sorry! I didn't realize it was my turn!
Hi, the name is Jasmine, but you can call me Jaz! Nice to meet you :D !
  





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Fri Nov 20, 2020 8:22 pm
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JasmineFelicia says...



I'm done!
Hi, the name is Jasmine, but you can call me Jaz! Nice to meet you :D !
  





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Fri Nov 20, 2020 8:28 pm
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LZPianoGirl says...



I loved it!

goodness the cop seems so mean. like trespassing on private property without a warrant (or maybe he has one?? idk bros) like that and just being all ominous and omg it was amazing lol.
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Fri Nov 20, 2020 11:42 pm
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soundofmind says...



omg OMG OMG OMGMGGMGGGMGMMGMGMGG aAAAAAAAAAA WHAT DO WE DO WHAT DO WE DO?????

WHAT SHOULD THE COP DO??? IM SCREAMING OMG
DO THEY
ARE THEy ? ? ? GOING TO GET ARRESSTED??????????????
*goes berserk*

THAT SAID AWESOME POST JAZZY

*surpise conflict happens*
*i go berserk*
  





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Sat Nov 21, 2020 12:14 am
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Corvid says...



great post!
losing my mind i love this. conflict who? i am excited.
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Sat Nov 21, 2020 12:21 am
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LZPianoGirl says...



CONFLICT i love it

just planning ahead i think the men would go to jail and adeline and mags would see this out the window and be like "oH nOoOoOoOo" and then sommers comes back and they tell him and he's also like "oH nOoOoOoOo"

and then on the flip side bo's just like "yo bros imma break us out of jail" and verbally liam and levi are like "wait what dude" but internally theyre like "I KNEW THIS GUY WAS A CRIMINAL" or whatever. and then something happens im not really sure yet.

oh and sommers would get in trouble for being an accessory or accomplice to the "crime" after the fact because he hid them and perhaps tampering with evidence (i.e. the truck)
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