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Sun Nov 15, 2020 10:37 pm
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LZPianoGirl says...



sounds good sound! id be happy to answer any question you have lol.
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Mon Nov 16, 2020 12:58 am
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I know we don't start the next round of posts til tomorrow but I already have an idea for a post where I wanna include Levi more >:) i think it would be interesting if maybe Levi and Bo are out workin on the car and they can talk a bit????

IDK i just was thinkin
1. i wanna include levi more
2. bo and levi are from very diff walks of life so i think it'd be interesting

the post could cause a lot of conflict though, at least, between them >_>

things could get tense

basically i want Levi to check the glovebox and realize the gun is missing

no idea if you're around @Tenyo and if you'd be able to give a little insight into how Levi would react and what he'd do/say! like, if he'd keep quiet or ask bo or be sus of anyone or anything
  





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Mon Nov 16, 2020 8:04 am
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Is it fine if it's Liam walking down the stairs?
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I'm done!
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Mon Nov 16, 2020 4:45 pm
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Tenyo says...



@soundofmind

I appreciate that < 3

I'm doing a bit better this week, though realistically I'm not sure if I'll be able to catch up on everything I've missed yet. It would be fun to do a collab though, if you're up for it!

Levi is quite forward, but tactful. He'll most likely mention it straight away to whoever he's with in a casual 'hey, where is the gun?' He's more likely to assume someone just moved it than anything suspicious.

When the group is together he'll find an appropriate moment to bring it up, maybe by saying 'by the way, I noticed the gun wasn't in the glove box, did we move it?' (or casually ask a question that might confirm/conflict if someone has already given him an answer.)

He would be fairly gentle and avoid making accusations, but won't let the subject drop until they find a resolution.
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Mon Nov 16, 2020 8:36 pm
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That's really helpful to know, @Tenyo!! <3 Thank you so much!

Since you haven't caught up, the reason I had this idea is because Bo took the gun outta the glovebox. It doesn't have to be a huge point of conflict, I just thought, naturally it might be concerning if you find a weapon isn't where you thought it was!

If Levi were to ask Bo where the gun was Bo would tell him he took it out and made sure it wasn't loaded, but he would show he had it on him. Not sure how Levi would react to that, but from what you said it sounds like he'd be pretty chill and probably keep his thoughts more to himself? Would he suggest they do anything with it - like, just put it back or something?
  





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Mon Nov 16, 2020 11:02 pm
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ALSO I forgot to say! @JasmineFelicia I loved your post and poor Liam, being embarassed awwwh

I think it's @Corvid's turn to go!
  





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Tue Nov 17, 2020 1:18 pm
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Corvid says...



great post, Jasmine!

I'll do my best to get a post up by tonight!
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Wed Nov 18, 2020 5:05 am
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posted!
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Wed Nov 18, 2020 5:47 am
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JasmineFelicia says...



Ah yes! Tea puns! That was excellent!
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Wed Nov 18, 2020 12:35 pm
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Tenyo says...



@soundofmind If Bo said he was checking it wasn't loaded Levi would probably, again quite politely, say something like 'is it?' followed by 'then I guess we should put it back where we found it.'

He's a bit torn between checking it himself, wiping their prints off it, or chucking it so that when they get arrested for grand theft auto they don't also have a stolen weapon on them.

It's a building conflict in him so at the moment he's probably defaulting quite rigidly to manners and sensibilities as a way of trying to cope with it.
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Wed Nov 18, 2020 1:51 pm
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LZPianoGirl says...



I loved the post, Jasmine! Is sound or I up?
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Wed Nov 18, 2020 4:33 pm
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Maybe sound?? Because you were before me and Corvid was after.
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