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An Unexpected Time {DT}



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Mon Nov 02, 2020 7:04 pm
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JasmineFelicia says...



That's interesting! I never thought that they may not recognize the police care. Also "ominous looking car"
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Mon Nov 02, 2020 10:12 pm
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soundofmind says...



TOTALLY VALID and love all of your points - I was just spewing from my sleep-deprived brain, and we don't have to get to all or any of my ideas!

I was just thinking before I drifted off to sleep that it would also be nice to take it slow and have some time for characters to bond more uwu and you know, figure some things out before cops swoop in and other things

like, Bo still has to get mags a fake ring obviously
  





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Mon Nov 02, 2020 10:17 pm
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LZPianoGirl says...



is it weird im kind of shipping bo and magnolia
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Mon Nov 02, 2020 10:20 pm
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soundofmind says...



I MEAN IT MAKES SENSE LOL ,,this all happened so fast, it started as a joke and is turning into the "we're fake dating ;)" trope!! it Just!! HAPPENED asdhlfgdjkh IDK

mags and bo really do vibe together tho and i dig it, i like their joking back and forth so far
  





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Mon Nov 02, 2020 10:37 pm
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LZPianoGirl says...



Alright, I posted! I hope I wrote your characters right (especially Levi's reaction to the gun, @Tenyo). I was thinking in Tenyo's post they could go to the diner and eat and be like "woah this place is sort of cool" and just people watch and such.
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Mon Nov 02, 2020 11:05 pm
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soundofmind says...



Loved your post LZ! Adeline being hungry? Mood. Same. These guys need food. Also it sounds like we're back to our usual posting orderrrrr sweeeeet
  





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Tue Nov 03, 2020 6:57 am
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JasmineFelicia says...



I ship Magnolia and Bo too, guys. It's an excellent ship

Also that was an awesome post LZ!
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Tue Nov 03, 2020 1:59 pm
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Tenyo says...



I think Levi's reaction is on par. He's not sensitive to guns- he went to a military school so he would have been taught cadet-style gun training- but he's been taught quite strict rules on how to handle a strange gun (mainly not to because you don't know what it's loaded with or if it's been modified.) He'll be very much of the opinion of 'don't aim it at something unless you plan to kill it.'

Also. They burgled a house and stole a car, and now they have a weapon. He is somewhat out of his depth XD

I'll try to get that next post up today.
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Wed Nov 04, 2020 7:05 am
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JasmineFelicia says...



Guys I don't know what you think of this idea, but what if Liam fell in love with someone from 1943
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Wed Nov 04, 2020 7:28 am
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soundofmind says...



Omg :0 THAT COULD BE INTERESTING

I CAN GET BEHIND THAT >_>
do you have any ideas?

maybe uhhhh Sommers has an assistant? or a nice neighbor?
  





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Wed Nov 04, 2020 9:18 am
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JasmineFelicia says...



Yeah that's what I was thinking. Or maybe his granddaughter if he's really old. And then he has a really hard decision to make.
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Wed Nov 04, 2020 10:15 am
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soundofmind says...



He could also convince the person to come with him <_<
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that is also an option
  





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Wed Nov 04, 2020 10:36 am
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JasmineFelicia says...



Yeah. Me stares into the distance in thought
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Wed Nov 04, 2020 1:54 pm
LZPianoGirl says...



I wAS thinking the exact same thing for Adeline lol (might be hard to find some lesbians though) I think that'd be really cute either way!

@Tenyo, how's your post coming?
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Wed Nov 04, 2020 4:54 pm
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Tenyo says...



Ah! Sorry! I've got a bunch of stuff to do before I get around to it so please feel free to skip me.
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