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Fri Oct 30, 2020 7:41 pm
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JasmineFelicia says...



I'm done with the chunk!
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Fri Oct 30, 2020 10:15 pm
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LZPianoGirl says...



Awesome! Just keeping track here, but we've done eight posts so far, so only me and whoever's next will have to go to reach ten.

I think in my post I'll have them pull over at a gas station or something to get gas (obviously) and maybe they (or most of them while one stays at the car) look around the town. Then they go searching for the address and I'll probably leave it there. Oh and was there any money in the car/house that they stole?
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Sat Oct 31, 2020 12:56 am
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LZPianoGirl says...



Alright, it's posted!
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Sat Oct 31, 2020 1:38 am
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soundofmind says...



Loved your post LZ!! Now the boys are sailors, lol

Glad for Magnolia's quick thinking, and even though Adeline doesn't like the nickname, I think Addy is cute haha
  





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Sat Oct 31, 2020 12:20 pm
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JasmineFelicia says...



I edited mine to have the whole ending scene that we worked on together, since it wouldn't make sense to post it after they got out of the truck. If it does make sense to put it in after the gas station, then I can take it away and Tenyo could post that chunk afterwards. Also nice post LZ!
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Sat Oct 31, 2020 1:04 pm
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Corvid says...



nice post LZ! Addy is an adorable nickname lol
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Sun Nov 01, 2020 12:15 am
soundofmind says...



Is tenyo next to post?
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Sun Nov 01, 2020 12:19 am
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LZPianoGirl says...



I believe so! @Tenyo, if you could get the next post in by (automatically updated to your time) so I can update our log, that'd be great!
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Sun Nov 01, 2020 1:58 pm
soundofmind says...



*sweating because deadling is coming up*
  





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Sun Nov 01, 2020 2:02 pm
LZPianoGirl says...



um if @Tenyo doesn't respond soon are we allowed to skip to you, @soundofmind
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Sun Nov 01, 2020 2:12 pm
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soundofmind says...



I don’t rhink there ar erules on posting order - that kind of stuff depends on the person running the SB, but I don’t rememeber tha tbeing in LSS rules. I think the only thing we can’t do is double post. If Tenyo doesn’t reply by the time I wake up I can write up a quick post before 9pm!

How many more words do we need?
  





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Sun Nov 01, 2020 2:17 pm
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I think we're all good on the word count!
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Sun Nov 01, 2020 4:10 pm
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Tenyo says...



I didn't realise we were waiting on me. I've already done two posts this week, so if we're only up to nine (if I've counted right) then someone else is down a post.
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Sun Nov 01, 2020 4:26 pm
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Tenyo says...



From what I can see we're still one post down as a crew, and between the collaborations and individual posts (I think) we're all up to date on our post and word counts except @Corvid , who needs to do one more post to stay in LSS.
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Sun Nov 01, 2020 4:48 pm
LZPianoGirl says...



Oh, yeah! Thanks for figuring that out @Tenyo! Sorry for bombarding you with notifications.
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