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Thu Oct 29, 2020 11:21 am
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soundofmind says...



@JasmineFelicia Hmm, I know I don't have the final say, but I think it'd be okay if you posted! You could cover Adeline, Magnolia, and Liam finding clothes to change into (and finding some for Levi, and Bo, who are outside) and then maybe they go out to Levi and Bo at the end, who can be outside by the car.

I imagine when they go out, Levi will be very distraught with all of the things everyone's suggesting, as Tenyo said. Stealing clothes. Stealing cars. I think Tenyo said he'd be vocal about not wanting to do it and not thinking it's okay.

If you end it on a "I'm not going" from Levi, we could cut-scene in the next post to them being in the car, for comedic effect (with Levi there of course, all disguised w/everyone else lol).

If you wrote up to that point I think that'd set it up really nicely for collaborating, so we can all just write their conversations while they're in the car!
  





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Thu Oct 29, 2020 1:10 pm
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JasmineFelicia says...



Mkay! Sounds good!
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Thu Oct 29, 2020 1:28 pm
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LZPianoGirl says...



Your post was amazing, sound!

Also, @JasmineFelicia, it'd be totally fine if you posted!
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Thu Oct 29, 2020 1:32 pm
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Corvid says...



loved your post @soundofmind, the photo descriptions were a nice detail!
looking forward to reading yours @JasmineFelicia!
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Thu Oct 29, 2020 7:56 pm
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LZPianoGirl says...



uh so i totally forgot that i was staying over at a friend's house tonight, so i wont be able to make the times tonight or tomorrow @ noon. im super, super sorry. um i understand that adeline will still need to be in the collab post(s) so please feel free to do as you please with her.
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Thu Oct 29, 2020 9:12 pm
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JasmineFelicia says...



Just to be clear, we're writing in 48 mins, right?
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Thu Oct 29, 2020 9:53 pm
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Just finished my post!
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Thu Oct 29, 2020 10:12 pm
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Hey @Tenyo , Just wondering whether you're still able to hop in the pad right now?
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Fri Oct 30, 2020 1:35 am
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soundofmind says...



@LZPianoGirl the collaborations went well! Tenyo and Jasmine have to edit their last two posts and get them up, but other than that they're done! I think now we can revert back to the usual posting order and you can go after them with Adeline! Maybe with them driving into town?

Bo will be looking for the address, so he'll be looking out for East Cherry Street, but if they have to stop or pull over for another reason he will :)

Also I'm trying to think of things that didn't get covered in the posts that might be important uhhh

Everyone changed into 1940s clothes except Bo, who couldn't really fit into anything except a jacket that is too tight on him, so he looks a bit goofy. The hat fits though. He is probably wearing the jacket over his sweatshirt at this point ahsdljkfdghl

All that to say, he will be a lot more hesitant to step out of the truck and go looking around since he already sticks out like a sore thumb
  





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Fri Oct 30, 2020 10:07 am
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Also Okay So I Wanted to give everyone their 1940's clothes and I wanted Bo included so indulge me:

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IF/WHEN he finds clothes that fit this is what I imagine :,) OVERALLS
IDK WHAT you guys imagined but I just googled 1940s clothes and found stuff lol
  





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Fri Oct 30, 2020 1:13 pm
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Tenyo says...



I've updated my piece from the collab where I put the place marker. I did go through and edit some parts but I didn't change the interactions, only tweaked them to the way Levi interpreted them. I hope that works!
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Awesome picture! And everything sounds good Tenyo!
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Fri Oct 30, 2020 7:06 pm
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LZPianoGirl says...



I love the picture! Adeline’s dress is lovely! I’m on a drive with my dad right now, but I’ll try to get a post out once I get home.
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