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Sun Oct 04, 2020 5:00 pm
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HarryHardy says...



I get up at around 6 usually...sleep...what is that?...I've never heard of it
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Never give up hope no matter what. A battle that you turn up to is a battle that you've already started to win.


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Sun Oct 04, 2020 5:11 pm
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Elinor says...



I should be able to make it! :)

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Sun Oct 04, 2020 5:38 pm
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veeren says...



i will hopefully be able to make it but if not please do not hate me
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Sun Oct 04, 2020 6:04 pm
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Valkyria says...



8pm is when I turn off my electronics and watch tv with my parents. I'm really sorry that I can't make it, but if you guys come up with plot stuff, can you let me know in the DT, plz so I'm up to date.
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Sun Oct 04, 2020 11:59 pm
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Carina says...



no worries Valk!!

Here's a quick profile template, by the way. It does not have to be detailed whatsoever; in fact, most of it is already in the pad. I just split it up into sections. :) Also, I specified that it's a Cruise Background rather than an all-encompassing Background because I figured that we can learn about each other in the roleplay hehehe

Let me know if you think I'm missing anything!!

Code: Select all
[b]Name[/b]:
[b]Age[/b]:
[b]From[/b]: [city, country]
[b]Occupation[/b]:

[b]Appearance[/b]:

[b]Personality[/b]:

[b]Likes[/b]:
[b]Dislikes[/b]:

[b]Cruise Background[/b]: [include why they're on the cruise and who they were with]

[b]Other[/b]:



edit- @veeren, since your character is support... you may have to delete some of these sections lol

edit AGAIN - this is just a rough outline! Feel free to make your own sections if needed. Like, Jack will have an emphasis on family, so I'm going to add that.
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Mon Oct 05, 2020 12:09 am
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Elinor says...



I'm still finishing up some work but I'll try to hop in the write-in a little later. :) Is there a a link?

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Mon Oct 05, 2020 12:18 am
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Carina says...



Okay! and I don't think it's up yet so I'll hop on our riseup pad until it is. (which should be soon, I think)
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Mon Oct 05, 2020 12:28 am
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Carina says...



Okay, here it is!

https://omnom.writerfeedpad.com/lsswritein

I'll be filling out my CP there until whoever is available can hop in. then we can PLOT!
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Mon Oct 05, 2020 2:05 am
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Paging @Valkyria @HarryHardy

So @Carina and I had a very successful plotting session. I'm going to be adding Moira's bio to our piratepad, and I imagine Carina will do the same with hers. I also wanted to let you both know I created two avatars for her, one before and one after the sinking. It would be awesome if you guys wanted to do both of them to match with me. Carina's going to look for an option to match with us since these are for girl characters only. I thought it was fun showing how she would have gotten more tan and how the sinking would have changed her.

I can't wait to see what your characters look like!

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Before:

Image

After:

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First: https://www.azaleasdolls.com/dressupgam ... incess.php
Second: https://www.azaleasdolls.com/dressupgam ... incess.php

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Mon Oct 05, 2020 2:41 am
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Carina says...



Added Jack on our pad! You can use the template I posted before but feel free to make a section if needed :)

also, Elinor I read through the entire intro post in the pad and I love it!! I wouldn't mind if you put the whole thing in the thread and then we rewrite it from the beginning haha

THE CHARACTER BUILDERS ARE SO COOL. if we match... omg. how cute would that be

just gotta find an islandy one for dudes now......
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Mon Oct 05, 2020 3:44 am
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Carina says...



dropping this here for all to see-

I finally found one that looks decent for dudes!

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Jack before:
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Jack after:
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somehow he got more ripped on the beach LOL must've been from the ninja-lookin clothes
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Mon Oct 05, 2020 1:56 pm
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Valkyria says...



Your characters look amazing, but I'm having trouble uploading my image of Eliza. Maybe it's the type of laptop I'm using.
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Elinor says...



@Valkyria I go to imgur and upload the images there.

Then they give you share codes for forums -- complete with the [img] tag so you just have to copy/paste!

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Mon Oct 05, 2020 2:51 pm
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veeren says...



okay let's see if this works, here's a pic of the captain!

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and also:
Spoiler! :
i see someone noted in the pad that the name "captain morgan" is considered disrespectful, and i was curious as to why? i don't mind changing it at all i'd much rather not have anyone upset by it :(
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Mon Oct 05, 2020 2:54 pm
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Elinor says...



@veeren

He looks great! Also, I don't have a problem with the name. I thought it was funny.

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Owning our story can be hard but not nearly as difficult as spending our lives running from it. Embracing our vulnerabilities is risky but not nearly as dangerous as giving up on love and belonging and joy—the experiences that make us the most vulnerable. Only when we are brave enough to explore the darkness will we discover the infinite power of our light.
— Brené Brown