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Wed Dec 02, 2020 9:40 am
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Carina says...



I have more time to post today or tomorrow too!

@Elinor do you plan on posting this week? I had Jack interact with Moira so I thought I'd ask you first before posting
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Wed Dec 02, 2020 2:07 pm
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Elinor says...



I will do my best to get in a post this week! Can’t promise anything though.

Edit: Go ahead and post and I will follow!

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Thu Dec 03, 2020 5:02 am
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My activity is going to be a tad spotty again this weekend but tomorrow I've got a couple hours to kill in a car that I'll use to write up some drawn-out posts lol
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Thu Dec 03, 2020 10:35 pm
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Valkyria says...



I posted a little something! Maybe Susan can get the idea to build the model Carina showed us earlier from Eliza's remark.
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Fri Dec 04, 2020 2:31 am
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Carina says...



That's a great idea Val!

Also, not being able to roleplay Jack/Moira interaction is giving me some writers block acsvdbdjsjs and combined with the crazy week I have, I don't think I'll be able to get my required 4 posts in :(

@Valkyria @HarryHardy I don't want this to interfere with your LSS goals so let's brainstorm a solution. I can get back to the grind next week, but if you guys still want to maintain privateer status with a registered ship, you both have to somehow get 20 posts in. I may be able to help with 1 or 2 before the end of the weekend. Otherwise, I wonder if you can be a privateer on a pirate ship..? I'd have to look at the rules again

sorry for the inconvenience guys!
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Fri Dec 04, 2020 2:37 am
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HarryHardy says...



Umm...to survive this week, I think maybe @Valkyria's idea would be just about perfect. If Moira joins Jack and they decide to prepare food or something along those lines and sort of split up while Susan and Eliza go build this, with the few technical details here and there for Susan to spout 20 posts will be hit in no time, we'll just need one or two posts so that people can see where Jack and Moira are at.
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Fri Dec 04, 2020 4:05 am
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Carina says...



@HarryHardy omg, I so admire your commitment and loyalty. You deserve a medal haha

We'll say for this week, Jack/Moira separated from Susan/Eliza the entire time. I can definitely get 2 posts in by Sunday! it'll, uhh, likely be on Sunday though lol

Also Harry, would you be okay if you were captain for this week again? my brain still needs recovery after a hectic two weeks of life aklsjdfhsk

you are seriously a lifesaver
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HarryHardy says...



Thanks <33

Okay, that sounds good...better go research on that then...initiating super nerd mode...

Ahh sure no problem :)

:D :D
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Fri Dec 04, 2020 6:24 pm
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Posted!!

Took us to that halfway point with ten posts...I think I covered for Elinor's five posts in case she can't make it and two of Carina 's so...umm Val, I think if we have a little more back and forth so that your five is done then I can do mine and we should be at 16 posts so well Susan can go a little overboard explaining that solar sill and make up that final four as required depending on how many Carina can do and also whether Elinor gets one in there somehow about Jack and Moira plucking coconuts...xD...that's going to be fun to see how they peel that thing. Coconuts are insanely hard to get into.

Aaand I hope Sue didn't get too rambly there, I tried to make it just be her trying to pitch the whole thing like she's in class or something with the whole build up and all...this is totally not how I tend to pitch ideas.
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Fri Dec 04, 2020 6:40 pm
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Valkyria says...



You are absolutely amazing, @HarryHardy!

Susan's rambling is great! I posted Eliza's response, so we can go from there.
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Aww thanks <33

Glad that came out okay :)
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Fri Dec 04, 2020 6:54 pm
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:)...and I posted :)
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Fri Dec 04, 2020 7:33 pm
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Carina says...



@HarryHardy !!! Amazing work! I love Susan's rambling hahahah

susan pls save us to keep our ship afloat
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Sat Dec 05, 2020 2:57 pm
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HarryHardy says...



Thanks!!

Will do me best, Captain!! *salutes*

And posted, one more and I can get Susan to ramble about materials and cover out posts hopefully. :)
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Sun Dec 06, 2020 6:04 am
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HarryHardy says...



Alrighty, I think we're safe for this week...
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