Young Writers Society

YES A MAP

except my map making skills are 0/10 lol i imagined the island to obvs be surrounded by beaches, then have a nice little woodsy area around the perimeter of that, and then thick ghosty forest in the perimeter of that, and then an abandoned town smack dab in the middle. SOMETHIN LIKE THAT

@Carina, yeah she picked up some clothes I think

Hmm...map...

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just some wholesome convo in front of a fireplace so we can cry about the dead bodies in our sleep later

also reading susan's may have made me inspire jack to apologize lol

Hehe

Well I posted. Susan just realized something...gave her some motivation to get off the island?? Thought maybe I could foreshadow how we decided she could maybe design the thing they escape on??

YES SUSAN 👀👀👀 we depend on u

jack out here tryna pretend he doesn't have feelings

@Elinor Jack actually didn't say out loud what his alternative could've-would've-should've plan was asdhfhfjmfn he just an inner monologue about it. I thought about editing my post so he does say it out loud since I am amused with how the conversation is going, but it'd be out of character for him to say that out loud,,, HNNG

I'm sorry for not reading more carefully. Would you mind editing it just this time so he does say it loud? I don't have time to go back and edit my post and figure out at a workaround. Besides, I think trying to stir up conversation is going to make this RP more interesting and engaging since we've been internal for so long and I think part of me misreading the post was an attempt to do that.

@Elinor Thats okay, it happens! And I know what you mean, but I'm against writing an out of character scene. Maybe I could somehow weave it in there realistically, but I'd have to sit down and really think about it since it's an OOC thing to say without it coming up organically, and I won't have time to do that until nighttime when I get home. Even then, I still doubt I can do it right lol

Jack did mention first aid. Maybe Moira gets it out, and to strike conversation, asks if anyone else planned on doing something other than a cruise, before (obviously) settling on the cruise. Just an idea! The first paragraph would have to be changed, but her saying she'd go to Hawaii would be the same.

I fixed it.

Ended up double posting so I could finish up for the week.

I know we talked about Moira finding a ukulele at some point so I went ahead and wrote that part.

I imagine Moira's voice sounds a bit like Ingrid Michaelson's? Definitely a coffee shop acoustic type.

Also, here's the song. I tried to find a cover that might be comparable but I couldn't so try to imagine it.

Hi, I’m really sorry to triple post but @HarryHardy it looks you accidentally copied a part of my post in yours?

Anyway, I’m looking forward to Sunday and excited to keep moving forward with y’all

Whoops...

Thanks @Elinor!

also I was just about to ask the same thing, because I was like, "wait a sec, Susan has a crush on Elvis? HAH" then remembered Moira said the same thing lol

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