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Fri Nov 20, 2020 8:18 pm
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Carina says...



is it assumed that the new group of people all know each other already? or did they kinda just woke up in the store and haven't found each other yet

i'm not particularly hiding who my new character is, and it seems sound isn't either, so now i am amused to think that carter-in-james's-body has to listen to young-elias-in-random-adult-body talk all day lol

also because i want to transition POVs and control kaya that way >_>
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Fri Nov 20, 2020 8:47 pm
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Magebird says...



I think they just entered the store! They could theoretically have already met if you and someone else wanted them to, but I know Allen hasn't met anyone besides Stephanie yet. :)
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Fri Nov 20, 2020 9:11 pm
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TheMulticoloredCyr says...



'Tallulah' would have given anyone curious enough to approach her a hearty "f*ck the f*ck off you f*ck*ng, sparkle-snorting glitterdiver", so if anyone has met her they probably didn't have the greatest experience.
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Sat Nov 21, 2020 1:14 am
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soundofmind says...



i am living for all of the new character dynamics now

carter has arrived and he is not happy about it lol
  





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Sat Nov 21, 2020 1:28 am
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TheMulticoloredCyr says...



Carter's intro was gold. Thinking of James like a sad dog he should've put down when he had the chance.

Also, can we up the rating? Queenie's gonna recognize 'James' and there may be some internal cursing. How do y'all feel about a 16+ rating?
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Sat Nov 21, 2020 1:29 am
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soundofmind says...



i think we've already got a 16+ rating!

also THANK U I'm glad u liked his intro lollll
  





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Sat Nov 21, 2020 2:40 am
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Elinor says...



Goodness I’m annoyed with Carter already. Lacey and “Rachel” are both going to hate his guts. Also it should be fairly easy to guess who fake Rach really is shortly.

And I’m good with upping the rating.

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Sat Nov 21, 2020 2:44 am
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soundofmind says...



carter has a very annoying internal dialogue and I'm glad you are also annoyed lol
you're welcome
everyone is welcome to hate his guts uwu

I KEEP TRYING TO GUESS WHO RACHEL IS BUT IM NOT SURE YET
  





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Sat Nov 21, 2020 3:12 am
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Magebird says...



I also haven't figured out for sure yet, but I'm sure future posts will help me narrow down the possible characters! My brain's just fried from trying to pick a character for this. :P

Also, I'll get a post up tomorrow morning! Allen doesn't technically have anything to do with what's going on, but he'll definitely give us a little more direction. :)
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Sat Nov 21, 2020 3:12 am
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TheMulticoloredCyr says...



CARTER KNOWS QUEENIE

THEY MET IN THE LIBRARY

SHE'S GONNA SLIT HIS FUCKING THROAT OH MY GODS


Edit: If those of you who have met 'tallulah' don't know who she actually is by now I'm going to be so disappointed in you.
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Sat Nov 21, 2020 3:27 am
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Carina says...



*pretends to have met all these characters and understand the significance*

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Sat Nov 21, 2020 3:28 am
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Elinor says...



fake Rachel also knows Carter

I got tired of putting quotes around Rachel but there you go. I think keeping everything in Lacey’s perspective will help keep the two characters manageable.

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Sat Nov 21, 2020 3:46 am
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soundofmind says...



@Carina BASICALLY everyone hates carter for good reasons because he may have been 100% down to murder a child and once everyone realizes who he is he will probably have a bad time™

ALSO I really hope Carter isn't in ACTUAL™ James's body because if anyone decides they want to deck Carter which is well deserved and valid i would hate for James to eventually have to deal with that physical pain aftermath lol

I really put myself in a dilemma here

ALSO IS RACHEL ESTHER?

AND I KNOW WHO TALLULAH IS BUT IDK IF U WANT ME TO SAY
  





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Sat Nov 21, 2020 3:49 am
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Elinor says...



@soundofmind Rachel might be Esther :eyes:

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Sat Nov 21, 2020 4:30 am
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TheMulticoloredCyr says...



I'M GLAD YOU KNOW

I mean, yeah, anyone who has been in an rp with 'Tallulah' definitely knows who she is by now, so you can say it.
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