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Sun Oct 04, 2020 4:22 pm
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Carina says...



Yay!! Glad it was realistic :) So what happened was that Dora helps Mari cheat in her math and science classes while Mari helps out wherever she can... which is only art, Spanish, maybe PE lol. (cough @SirenCymbaline hope this is okay >_>) Dora was passing her the answers to a homework assignment like it was a drug deal lol but Filisha caught on! Let's just say this was not the first time they pulled this off in front of them :p
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Sun Oct 04, 2020 4:50 pm
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HarryHardy says...



What @Carina said got me thinking and we actually have three teams in this group of 7.

-The Reconnaissance Team

Mari...detect target
Fil...listen in
Jane...verify information

-The KNIFE TEAM

-Dora...make random things into steel
-Signe...make knife and go stabby stabby

-The Elemental Team

-Phoenix and Daph...just blast people with the forces of nature
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Sun Oct 04, 2020 5:13 pm
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Carina says...



YES.

Reconnaissance Team are the spies who go unnoticed, Knife Team are the rogues for backup in case the spies get caught, and Elemental Team are the backup to the backup where they can destroy everything and cause chaos. xD

I hope one day we get to write a Heist chapter
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Wed Oct 07, 2020 10:22 pm
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SirenCymbaline says...



A heist chapter would be rad tho
  





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Thu Oct 08, 2020 2:17 am
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Heist Chapter Must Happen
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Thu Oct 08, 2020 3:15 pm
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SirenCymbaline says...



Also @Carina sorry I forgot to reply to you earlier but I did love Mari and Dora's drug-deal style homework cheat exchange, that was great
  





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Thu Oct 08, 2020 4:03 pm
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Carina says...



haha yay!!

I figured Dora would be the least lawful one in school and wouldn't care if she helped Mari cheat lol. As a side note, I tried to find a gif for their secret cheat handshake, but could not find a good one. >:T
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Fri Oct 09, 2020 1:35 am
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Lia5Giba says...



Yo guys, could I post next? I kinda wanna have my girl have some action... or something.

Oh! @HarryHardy! We could write a co-post with Filisha and Daphne, or something along those lines. Since they're already near each other. Think about it?


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@Lia5Giba, so after that I read through the post by @Carina, and the plans that I had with @SirenCymbaline and I propose this...

1. So I've been working on a short little intro post for Daph, just her before school...with grandma and a dream which I'll post soon. (To avoid repitition later)

Then it was supposed to be me and Siren, bit of log fight and then we team up for the final battle...but...I think if you want to collab we could do this.

Since the way this is going from @Carina's and @Magebird's posts, Mari and Jane are the ones near the log when stuff goes down, you'd assume this other log thing happens at an earlier point and in @Carina's post they all chilling with watermelon...@SirenCymbaline could post her scene before the log fight starts...@Lia5Giba can post something before school and watermelon, then we post a three way collab that starts with Dora and Daphne log situation, cuts to watermelon stand...drug deal happens then like Fil follows Dora, who happens to be walking towards Daph, for drug deal interrogation purposes...aaand then the bad guys attack while their talking about that.

So they start fighting, seconds later joined by Daph and then just chaos ensues.

-So the two of them would be what Daph's looking for in @Carina's post.

-Also I realize Fil's powers are not very offensive so probably team up is good?

Edit: Wow this looks like a tagbook post.
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Fri Oct 09, 2020 4:40 am
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@Lia5Giba anyone can post right now but collab would be awesome!! I can't wait to see what you guys come up with :D

Oh gosh @HarryHardy you've really thought this through! lol I feel like I need a visual timeline of events...

I love how we're calling the homework cheat the drug deal LOL
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Fri Oct 09, 2020 11:26 am
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I'm not sure if anyone has already seen this on my wall, but my grandfather passed away this morning. It's been coming for a long time, but this Sunday he was admitted to the ICU after an intense surgery. We knew this was coming.

I'll still be lurking around the site, but I likely won't be as active in this DT as I have been in the past for the next week or two. I apologize in advance if it takes me awhile to respond to any questions or discussions here.

Also, I've been silently reading along with this discussion - I love the idea of more collaboration with the posts.
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Fri Oct 09, 2020 6:23 pm
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HarryHardy says...



Aaand so that's Daph's before coming to school scene...hope its okay...onto the chaos now...
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Fri Oct 09, 2020 6:52 pm
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SirenCymbaline says...



That was damn sweet, Daphne is a cinnamon roll, be proud
  





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Sat Oct 10, 2020 1:13 am
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Carina says...



Mage <3 take your time and I hope you know there's no pressure at all here (or really any of the other RP/SBs you're in) to reply. We got your back. <3

@HarryHardy AWWW SWEET DAPH. I loved this line:

"Unless those miscreants you have as friends drag you off somewhere."

"They're not that bad grandma," said Daphne, pouting.


why do I feel like it's mostly Jane, Mari, and occasionally Dora that grandma has a problem with LOL

sorry Grandma Danvers for all the chaos Daphne got dragged into

SPEAKING OF CHAOS... I can't wait to see who'll write the next scene!!
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Sat Oct 10, 2020 2:18 am
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SirenCymbaline says...



Hehe it's me

Co-writing with HarryHardy so that's two reasons to get excited
  








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