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Fri Sep 25, 2020 6:59 am
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KateHardy says...



Okayy...I could do that...come to think of it...as someone who has seen and done that...heavier people do have a disadvantage on that thing...especially if the opponent knows Physics and goes for the head for maximum turning effect...Sorry to get sciency...and both of them combined is probably the best because someone will have to talk Daphne into it.
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I love both of those ideas.
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Fri Sep 25, 2020 8:59 pm
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@HarryHardy I'll get more done on the skeleton of my draft, add some prompts of the basic setup, then paste it somewhere we can collab on it, does that sound good?

also is your preference wfp or google docs
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Sounds good @SirenCymbaline.

And anything's fine for me. Pick the one that's easier for you.
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Wed Sep 30, 2020 3:05 am
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Carina says...



I'll get my post up this week! I already have an idea of what to post; just gotta write it up :p

I'm going to try to mention everyone, but it won't be anything big. and of course, if it doesn't end up being accurate, I can make edits!
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Thu Oct 01, 2020 6:54 pm
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@HarryHardy

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZBK ... sp=sharing

ignore the other stuff on the doc, just skip down a lil and you'll find it

sorry I didn't send it earlier hehe
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Mageheart says...



@Carina, I can't wait to see that post!

And @SirenCymbaline and @HarryHardy, I hope the collaborating goes well! Google docs thankfully doesn't seem to have the same problem that WFP has right now, so hopefully you won't get booted out midway through working on it.
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Sun Oct 04, 2020 3:14 am
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Carina says...



Posted!! It was a bit of a challenge to figure out ways to include everyone naturally, so let me know if I wrote someone out of character and I'll edit it :)

ALSO. At the end of the post, the people Mari are heading after are invisible. But because she has always had UV/IR vision, she can see them like they're normal people (since they still emit a head signature) and so she doesn't even know they're invisible. Add on to the fact that steam-smoke is coming that way, and Daphne may be able to see their outline and spark the heck out of them ;P

Just some background info in case you wanna implement Mari beating the hecc out of what looks like air! LOL
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Sun Oct 04, 2020 3:21 am
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KateHardy says...



It's awesome!!

Ahh...all this superhero fighting is charging me up. I clearly did not just grab one of my wooden swords and destroy some pillows while doing silly fight moves
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Sun Oct 04, 2020 3:34 am
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Yay!! haha CHARGE... so punny... electrifyyyyy

I wanted to keep going with action scenes but decided I'd let you (or whoever) take the reins ;) but also not because I totally suck at actions scenes nooooo >_>
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Pun not intended but I'll pretend that it was my plan all along

Ahhh...hopefully it'll be me and @SirenCymbaline next...there is a outline...I think...hopefully it comes out well and we get more carnage

But also the action that was there was amazing...you do not suck by any means.
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Sun Oct 04, 2020 4:15 am
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hehehe awww <3 I'm looking forward to reading the posts!!
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Sun Oct 04, 2020 11:50 am
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Mageheart says...



@Carina, I love your post! I read it first thing this morning - it was a great start to the day. :)

I also love how she's seeing invisible people! I feel like that would be a fun thing to bring back in future posts after we're done with the little Field Day arc. <3
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Sun Oct 04, 2020 4:00 pm
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Carina says...



ahhHhHh thank u mage :')

And yea!! Mari and Filisha would make a great spy team. Filisha would be able to hear how many people are around while Mari could take a glance and see exactly where people are hiding lol
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JoyDark says...



Great post, @Carina! I like what you did to Filisha, she's super shy and a total Opaline (don't ask. Please). I like the coughing thing... seems very realistic. Though I don't get why she would think they were talking about homework...
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