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'The Odin', Part One: Finding the Odin DT



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Thu Sep 10, 2020 4:05 pm
LittleLee says...



Yeah, sure! It's night here, so I'll do a post tomorrow, if that's okay.

And you don't need to tag me; I've subscribed. :)
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Thu Sep 10, 2020 4:08 pm
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okay! looking forward to your post.
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Thu Sep 10, 2020 4:11 pm
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Just for clarification; what would you like John to be doing when Blaze finds him?
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Thu Sep 10, 2020 4:17 pm
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He's just at his desk at work, alone in his office.
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Thu Sep 10, 2020 4:22 pm
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What office? What job does he hold?

I'm sorry for all the questions, I just want to make sure I don't do something with John you don't like.
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Thu Sep 10, 2020 4:56 pm
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IamI says...



I'm not sure of the specifics right now, but he's the head of the business, if that helps. I'll get back to you with more info in a little while.
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Thu Sep 10, 2020 9:22 pm
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I was thinking with my bounty hunter, to make them more bounty hunter-ish there could be some other enemy of the Odin urging him on to go after the crew, like a bribe or threatening his family. That way it might make them more willing to break the law and throws in another *mysterious* enemy for the crew.
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Thu Sep 10, 2020 9:34 pm
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IamI says...



LittleLee, Alright, I'm back. I'm thinking he's the founder/leader a mechanic shop.
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Thu Sep 10, 2020 9:36 pm
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HGsomeone, That sounds like a good idea, but I don't have any specific ideas regarding this.
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Sun Sep 13, 2020 6:05 am
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LittleLee says...



I've made the first post! I hope it's alright.
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Sun Sep 13, 2020 11:46 am
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IamI says...



I really like it! I'll get started on mine now.
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Sun Sep 13, 2020 1:21 pm
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HarryHardy says...



Blaze seems like a pretty cool character. Great post!
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Sun Sep 13, 2020 10:49 pm
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I’m curious, what will be the orders for the posts?
  





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Sun Sep 13, 2020 11:20 pm
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I’m going next, but I’m not really sure on the order after that, probably the rest of the pirates, then the other bounty hunter, then the law enforcement.
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Fri Sep 18, 2020 1:02 am
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Hey, LittleLee, I have a question, do you think you could make Blaze shoot a gun out of John's hand? I have John with a pistol in his pocket from the first line and think it would just make more sense that he would keep weapon close at hand, plus I think it would be cool to show Blaze shooting a gun out of someone's hand.

also, just an update: I'm almost finished with my post (I've just about made it to John's encounter with Blaze) and if all goes well I should have it up no later than Friday next week...hopefully.
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