Young Writers Society

Yeah, sure! It's night here, so I'll do a post tomorrow, if that's okay.

And you don't need to tag me; I've subscribed.

okay! looking forward to your post.

Just for clarification; what would you like John to be doing when Blaze finds him?

He's just at his desk at work, alone in his office.

What office? What job does he hold?

I'm sorry for all the questions, I just want to make sure I don't do something with John you don't like.

I'm not sure of the specifics right now, but he's the head of the business, if that helps. I'll get back to you with more info in a little while.

I was thinking with my bounty hunter, to make them more bounty hunter-ish there could be some other enemy of the Odin urging him on to go after the crew, like a bribe or threatening his family. That way it might make them more willing to break the law and throws in another *mysterious* enemy for the crew.
Just an idea if anyone has a fellow idea for the enemy

LittleLee, Alright, I'm back. I'm thinking he's the founder/leader a mechanic shop.

HGsomeone, That sounds like a good idea, but I don't have any specific ideas regarding this.

I've made the first post! I hope it's alright.

I really like it! I'll get started on mine now.

Blaze seems like a pretty cool character. Great post!

I’m curious, what will be the orders for the posts?

I’m going next, but I’m not really sure on the order after that, probably the rest of the pirates, then the other bounty hunter, then the law enforcement.

Hey, LittleLee, I have a question, do you think you could make Blaze shoot a gun out of John's hand? I have John with a pistol in his pocket from the first line and think it would just make more sense that he would keep weapon close at hand, plus I think it would be cool to show Blaze shooting a gun out of someone's hand.

also, just an update: I'm almost finished with my post (I've just about made it to John's encounter with Blaze) and if all goes well I should have it up no later than Friday next week...hopefully.